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Areas to look into
The images are not named meaningfully. Would be good for you to choose meaningful names and upload them again. Perhaps you can take a look at Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style_(chemistry)/Structure_drawing to find out about our community's best practices. A few specific criticisms would be:
- Images
- the serif font you use in the reaction arrow for the first two images is very jarring in contrast to the sans serif fonts used for Br, NO2, etc. as well as the sans serif fonts used in the last image.
- the image width you have chosen is excessive for such a small image.
- the + sign and the reaction arrow is out of proportion to the benzene rings in the last image.
- References
- You will also need a stronger reference than a patent, to support the description of industrial production. What does Ullmann's say?
- Wikilinking
- Keywords should be wikilinked as appropriate.
Appreciate it if you look into these points. --Rifleman 82 (talk) 13:15, 14 April 2010 (UTC)