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Nominator: Ktkvtsh (talk · contribs) 18:02, 18 February 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 13:53, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 13:53, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
Earwig finds no issues.
- What makes tv2.today a reliable source?
Spotchecks; footnote numbers refer to this version:
- FN 12 cites "By examining photographs and maps, the CIT also disproved the official Russian thesis that Russian troops in Syria did not participate in ground battles." Verified, but I would change "thesis" to something like "position" or "statements"; a thesis is an argument for something, and this is just a simple assertion.
- FN 9 cites "On March 5, 2022, CIT announced that it had left Russia in order to be able to continue working." Verified.
- FN 15 cites "CIT clarified the biography details of the suspects in the poisoning of Sergei and Yulia Skripal in 2018." Verified, but I would credit Bellingcat, The Insider and Proekt as well, as the source does, and I think it would be better to just say "provided their real names" rather than "clarified the biography details", which is vague.
- FN 1 cites "The Conflict Intelligence Team (CIT) is an independent investigative organisation originating from Russia". Verified.
- The lead should be a summary of the body -- that is, there shouldn't be any information in the lead that is not in the body. Here's that's not the case -- the body needs to say that CIT is an investigative organization, and that it's one of thne largest groups to emerge from the Russo-Ukrainian War, and so on. I would suggest moving the whole first paragraph down into the history section, where it would fit without any changes, and then writing a new lead of four or five sentences that summarizes the whole article.
I'll read through again once these points are addressed. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 14:14, 15 June 2024 (UTC)
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