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Missing refs
@Kaliper1: Your edit here added references that do not connect to any citations, thereby creating Sfn/Harv errors. Can you please fix them and any others that may have been caused on this page? I'm not familiar with this article to do it myself. Thank you. —GoldRingChip 20:14, 15 September 2024 (UTC)
- @GoldRingChip: Thank you for the heads up. All proceeding Sfn/Harv errors should be all resolved by now. Cheers, Kaliper1 (talk) 11:11, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
- @Kaliper1: Thank you for addressing them. There are a few more refs with the hidden error: "There is no link pointing to this citation":
* {{cite web |title=Audrey Kahin: Writing Minangkabau History |url=http://www.thejakartapost.com/news/2014/01/22/audrey-kahin-writing-minangkabau-history.html |last=Syofyan |first=Donny |date=22 January 2014 |accessdate=11 June 2016 |work=[[The Jakarta Post]] |ref={{sfnRef|The Jakarta Post|22 Januari 2014}}}} * {{cite web |title=Lima Bulan Sukarno di Padang |url=http://historia.id/modern/lima-bulan-sukarno-di-padang |last= |first= |date=7 June 2016 |accessdate=9 June 2016 |work=Historia |ref={{sfnRef|Historia|7 Juni 2016}}}} * (A duplicate ref?): {{Cite book |title=Sejarah perjuangan kemerdekaan R.I. di Minangkabau/Riau, 1945-1950 |date=1991 |publisher=Badan Pemurnian Sejarah Indonesia-Minangkabau |isbn=978-979-405-126-9 |editor-last=Husein |editor-first=Ahmad |edition=Cet. 2., dengan perbaikan |location=Jakarta |editor-last2=Badan Pemurnian Sejarah Indonesia-Minangkabau}}
- If you add the scripts at User:Trappist the monk/HarvErrors you will see them. —GoldRingChip 13:22, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
Too long!
The article is oversized. Consider splitting off sections or trimming excessive detail. Srnec (talk) 18:35, 25 January 2025 (UTC)
Peer review
I've listed this article for peer review because... I've viewed that the article has been written to my best and furthest capabilities. I view that it requires peer review to better its comprehensiveness from the different point of view, input, and feedback of others. Possibly, interested in reaching FA status.
Thank you, Kaliper1 (talk) 16:47, 14 January 2025 (UTC)
A very interesting article. At a very quick read through:
- The lead needs to be expanded to encompass more of the article, it doesn't seem to mention sections 3, 5, and 6. The statement that the occupation ended on 17 August 1945 also doesn't seem supported by the body. The Surrender section seems to suggest it was a gradual and uncertain process that began on 15 August.
- The sentence starting "The defeat of the British naval forces..." needs rewriting. It might be worth asking for a general copyedit if you want to reach FA status. There's a other few bits I couldn't quite figure out here and there.
- "Shortly before the arrival of the Imperial Japanese forces on the coasts of the Indonesian archipelago, Dutch officials in West Sumatra attempted to persuade the local population to cooperate with the colonial administration." is missing some context as to what cooperation was being sought, and what the previous non-cooperative situation was. Perhaps the paragraph needs to be reorganised, as there seems to be some relevant information near the end. "Thus, the Dutch however did not foresee the lack of support from the local population." doesn't read as linked to its surrounding sentences, why did the Dutch foresee support?
- There seems to be missing information at the end, between "Echoes of the Proclamation" and "Official signing". Presumably, during this period Republican forces assumed control from the Japanese over much of the island?
- There is a mix of dmy and mdy date formats. It seems dmy is the dominant one?
- I've changed a few direct interwiki links to Template:ill links, the rest should be adjusted too.
Really good work. CMD (talk) 09:07, 2 February 2025 (UTC)
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