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Jerry's Painting has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

Jerry's Painting is part of the Parks and Recreation (season 3) series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.

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Date	Process	Result
May 6, 2011	Good article nominee	Listed
July 21, 2011	Good topic candidate	Promoted

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on May 9, 2011.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that "Jerry's Painting", an episode of the NBC comedy Parks and Recreation, features a painting with a topless centaur Greek goddess that resembles the lead character, played by Amy Poehler?

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Reviewer: Queenieacoustic (talk) 21:05, 5 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Will review this tomorrow. Queenieacoustic (talk) 21:05, 5 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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Plot

...while thinking of about powerful women... Drop "of" or "about".
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Production

"Jerry's Painting" was written by Norm Hiscock and directed by Dean Holland. During its original broadcast, "Jerry's Painting" ran for... Start the second sentence with "the episode" instead.
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
"Jerry's Painting" featured a guest appearance by Darlene Hunt as Marcia Langman, a member of the conservative group, the Society for Family Stability Foundation. Drop the second comma.
- Dropped it. — Hun ter Ka hn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Remember to write (pictured) after the name of the person in the picture.
- Added. — Hun ter Ka hn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Cultural references

...Andy and April instead start to purchase several "as seen on TV", including... Looks like a noun is missing after "as seen on TV", unless that is the noun?
- Nope, you're right. Added "items". — Hun ter Ka hn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

You should probably explain what the "ratings" and "shares" mean, for those who are not familiar with Nielsen ratings.
- Added. — Hun ter Ka hn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Why Leslie Knope mentioned by full name in the middle of the section?
- Not sure. Dropped the last name. — Hun ter Ka hn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

""Jerry's Painting" is the eleventh episode of the third season of the American comedy television series Parks and Recreation..." Write "Parks and Recreation's third season" instead.
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

With not much at all to complain about, this is overall a very well-written article. Just fix said issues and we've got ourselves another GA. I'll put it on hold for seven days so that the changes can be made. Queenieacoustic (talk) 09:08, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review! Much appreciated! — Hun ter Ka hn 14:41, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]
Looks good. Well done! Queenieacoustic (talk) 14:53, 6 May 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Usted

Why does April mispronounce the word usted when it's established the character speaks Spanish?
Varlaam (talk) 21:05, 14 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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