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Good article reassessment (GAR) is a process used to review and improve good articles (GAs) that may no longer meet the good article criteria (GACR). GAs are held to the current standards regardless of when they were promoted. All users are welcome to contribute to the process, regardless of whether they were involved with the initial nomination. Editors should prioritize bringing an article up to standard above delisting. Reassessments are listed for discussion below and are concluded according to consensus. The GAR Coordinators—Lee Vilenski, Chipmunkdavis, and Trainsandotherthings—work to organize these efforts, as well as to resolve contentious reviews. To quickly bring issues to their notice, or make a query, use the {{@GAR}} notification template, or make a comment on the talk page.
Good article reassessment is not a peer review process; for that use peer review. Content disputes on GAs should be resolved through normal dispute resolution processes. Good article reassessment only assesses whether the article meets the six good article criteria. Many common problems (including the presence of dead URLs, inconsistently formatted citations, and compliance with all aspects of the Manual of Style) are not covered by the GA criteria and therefore are not grounds for delisting. Instability in itself is not a reason to delist an article. Potential candidates for reassessment can be found on the cleanup listing. Delisted good articles can be renominated as good articles if editors believe they have resolved the issues that led to the delisting.

Before opening a reassessment
- Consider whether the article meets the good article criteria.
- Check that the article is stable. Requesting reassessment during a content dispute or edit war is usually inappropriate.
- Consider raising issues at the talk page of the article or requesting assistance from major contributors.
- If there are many similar articles already nominated at GAR, consider delaying the reassessment request. If an editor notices that many similar GARs are open and requests a hold, such requests should generally be granted.
Opening a reassessment
- To open a good article reassessment, use the GAR-helper script on the article. Detail your reasons for reassessing the article and submit. Your rationale must specify how you believe the article does not meet the good article criteria. GARs whose rationale does not include the GACR may be speedily closed.
- The user script does not notify major contributors or relevant WikiProjects. Notify these manually. You may use
{{subst:GARMessage|ArticleName|page=n}} ~~~~
to do so, replacing ArticleName with the name of the article and n with the number of the reassessment page (1 if this is the first reassessment). - Consider commenting on another reassessment (or several) to help with any backlog.
- Paste
{{subst:GAR}}
to the top of the article talk page. Do not place it inside another template. Save the page. - Follow the bold link in the template to create a reassessment page.
- Detail your reasons for reassessing the article and save the page. Your rationale must specify how you believe the article does not meet the good article criteria. GARs whose rationale does not include the GACR may be speedily closed.
- The page will automatically be transcluded to this page via a bot, so there is no need to add it here manually.
- Transclude the assessment on the article talk page as follows: Edit the article talk page and paste
{{Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/''ArticleName''/''n''}}
at the bottom of the page. Replace ArticleName with the name of the article and n with the subpage number of the reassessment page you just created. This will display a new section named "GA Reassessment" followed by the individual reassessment discussion. - Notify major contributing editors, including the nominator and the reviewer. Also consider notifying relevant active WikiProjects related to the article. The {{GARMessage}} template may be used for notifications by placing
{{subst:GARMessage|ArticleName|GARpage=n}} ~~~~
on user talk pages. Replace ArticleName with the name of the article and n with the subpage number of the reassessment page you just created.
Reassessment process
- Editors should discuss the article's issues with reference to the good article criteria, and work cooperatively to resolve them. Comments should focus on the article's contents and adherence to the good article criteria.
- The priority should be to improve articles and retain them as GAs rather than to delist them, wherever reasonably possible.
- Interested editors can indicate their intention to fix the article and give updates on their progress in the GAR. Commentators should periodically check the GAR and give additional comments when necessary. Wikipedia is not compulsory and editors should not insist that commentators, interested editors, or past GAN nominators make the suggested changes, nor should they state that edits should have been completed before the GAR was opened.
- If discussion has stalled and there is no obvious consensus, uninvolved editors are strongly encouraged to add a new comment rather than closing the discussion.
- If discussion becomes contentious, participants may request the assistance of GAR coordinators at Wikipedia talk:Good article nominations. The coordinators may attempt to steer the discussion towards resolution or make a decisive close.
Closing a reassessment
To close a discussion, use the GANReviewTool script on the reassessment page of the article and explain the outcome of the discussion (whether there was consensus and what action was taken).
- GARs typically remain open for at least one month.
- Anyone may close a GAR, although discussions which have become controversial should be left for closure by experienced users or GAR coordinators.
- If a clear consensus develops among participants that the issues have been resolved and the article meets GACR, the reassessment may be closed as keep at any time.
- If there is no consensus, the reassessment may also be closed as keep.
- After at least one month, if the article's issues are unresolved and there are no objections to delisting, the discussion may be closed as delist. Reassessments should not be closed as delist while editors are making good-faith improvements to the article.
- If there have been no responses to the reassessment and no improvements to the article, the editor who opened the reassessment may presume a silent consensus and close as delist.
- If the article has been kept, consider awarding the Good Article Rescue Barnstar to the editor(s) who contributed significantly to bringing it up to standard.
- Locate {{GAR/current}} at the the reassessment page of the article. Replace it with
{{subst:GAR/result|result=outcome}} ~~~~
. Replace outcome with the outcome of the discussion (whether there was consensus and what action was taken) and explain how the consensus and action was determined from the comments. A bot will remove the assessment from the GA reassessment page. - The article either meets or does not meet the good article criteria:
- If the article now meets the criteria, you can keep the article listed as GA. To do this:
- remove the {{GAR/link}} template from the article talk page
- remove the {{GAR request}} template from the article talk page, if present
- add or update the {{Article history}} template on the article talk page (example)
- If the article still does not meet the criteria, you can delist it. To do this,
- remove the {{GAR/link}} template from the article talk page
- remove the {{GAR request}} template from the article talk page, if present
- add or update the {{Article history}} template on the article talk page, setting currentstatus to DGA (delisted good article). (example)
- blank the class parameter of the WikiProject templates on talk, or replace it with a new assessment
- remove the {{good article}} template from the article page (example)
- remove the article from the relevant list at good articles (example)
- If the article now meets the criteria, you can keep the article listed as GA. To do this:
- Add the GAR to the most recent GAR archive page. (example)
Disputing a reassessment
- A GAR closure should only be contested if the closure was obviously against consensus or otherwise procedurally incorrect. A closure should only be disputed within the first seven days following the close.
- Before disputing a GAR closure, first discuss your concerns with the closing editor on their talk page.
- If discussing does not resolve concerns, editors should post at Wikipedia talk:Good article nominations and ask for review from uninvolved editors and the coordinators.
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Articles listed for reassessment
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One of the last 39 remaining entries at WP:SWEEPS2023, this 2009 GA promotion contains enough uncited text that it is an issue with WP:GACR. Hog Farm Talk 01:22, 21 September 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 13:52, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements in the "Ride experience" and "Theme" sections. I also think the lead can be expanded upon to include all major aspects of the article. Z1720 (talk) 13:48, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
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As noted earlier this year on the talk page, for basic GA breadth, the article is missing discussion of the compilation sequels: Crooning on Venus, Guitars on Mars, etc. Also the book (Ocean of Sound) and its companion compilation album are covered together in sources, indicating that they're part of the same entity. I wager that the book would be best represented within this article's scope rather than as a separate article. czar 01:53, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
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There wasn't much post-2013 information, so I did a quick Google search and found out that he wrote a book in 2019 [1], and other sources that could be used in the article [2]. This makes me believe that the article needs to be updated with more current events. Z1720 (talk) 22:53, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
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My rationale is at Talk:Suicide#GA status. I posted there first because I was hoping someone would be interested in addressing the concerns. Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 00:35, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
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The article relies heavily on unreliable sources. A 550-word plot summary is likely far too detailed for a 22-minute TV episode (including intro sequence and credits). ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 21:08, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements and an "update needed" orange banner at the top of the "History" section. Z1720 (talk) 21:02, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
Done Added missing refs, and updated history with mines' closure and recent geopolitical significance. —LastJabberwocky (Rrarr) 17:38, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
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Several uncited statements, especially in the "Accolades" section. Z1720 (talk) 20:04, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
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Big MOS/WP:V failures as identified by @MIDI: at both the DYK nom and the talk page. Launchballer 10:29, 11 September 2025 (UTC)
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No post-2020 information in the prose, even though he is still an active player. The lead does not summarise all major aspects of the article. Z1720 (talk) 14:29, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 14:25, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
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Lots of uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 14:11, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
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Lots of uncited statements, including almost the entire "Reticle types" section. Z1720 (talk) 14:09, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
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This was listed as a GA in 2014. Unsurprisingly, a lot of changes have been made since then, and unfortunately a lot of the recent ones introduce problems that -- while I don't have proof -- are very characteristic of LLM use. While there is no policy against AI-generated text, the issues here are specifically the ones like editorializing, undue emphasis on symbolism, superficial analysis, etc., that imply inherent WP:OR and WP:SYNTH problems that violate Good Article criterion #2. I'm not reviewing every diff -- and can't, because a giant swath of edits from 2021-2024 has been revdelled -- but here are some with issues.
- The edits by @Pwoli show consistent issues. To name a few: This one inserts a large wad of unreferenced, editorializing AI slop under the "Society and culture" section. This states that animal models play
a central role
in epilepsy research, an assertion of importance over other kinds of research that doesn't seem to be borne out by the source or in general. This inserts a lot of unsourced material like the assertion, with no citation, that delays in diagnosis arehighlighting the importance of careful clinical assessment and appropriate use of EEG and video documentation
, which may well be true but is still original research. - The 2024 edits by Saraakwong also show signs of AI use. Some of these were reverted in the edits above (which is for the best since I found a hallucination in one of them), but at least one, this, may be an overly close paraphrase of the source material, judgment call.
- In general I see several uncited statements ending paragraphs. I'm not tracking down the origin because, again, it's entirely possible that I can't.
— Preceding unsigned comment added by Gnomingstuff (talk • contribs) 19:04, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
- A couple of comments:
- Animal models are hugely important in drug research. I think that "central role" is a fair and neutral description in this case. The cited source (which, if you would like, may be fairly criticized on WP:MEDDATE grounds, being ~12.5 years old) uses words like "valuable" and "urgent" and "needed" to describe animal models. If your personal priority for epilepsy is more like prevention or figuring out how many people have it, then I could imagine animal models seeming less important to you, but within the biomedical research community, this really is of central importance. No new AEDs should realistically be expected until there are useful new animal models.
- What you deride as a large wad of unreferenced, editorializing AI slop under the "Society and culture" section appears to me to be an attempt to comply with the WP:UPFRONT guideline, by giving a general summary of the long section. For example, the second sentence is People with epilepsy may experience social stigma, legal restrictions, economic disadvantage, and barriers to education and employment., and the next three subsections in this section are: "Stigma", "Economic impact", "Driving and legal restrictions". The fourth sentence says Efforts by advocacy groups and international organizations aim to improve public understanding, reduce stigma, and promote access to care and the fourth subsection is "Advocacy and support organizations". I doubt that this is best explained by assuming LLM use.
- In terms of "editorializing", I don't see anything in that paragraph that isn't just the plain facts. The plain facts are that people with epilepsy sometimes do experience stigma. They do get fired from their jobs. They do get kicked out of school (maybe not in your country, but in many). They do get rejected socially. Editorializing sounds like "Society should be more supportive of people with epilepsy". Editorializing does not sound like "Social consequences, such as educational exclusion, unemployment, and social isolation, further compound the impact on quality of life". The sentence in the article is just stating the facts. There are social consequences, and those social consequences hurt people with epilepsy.
- I do think this article needs work, but I don't think that "AI slop" is actually one of its faults. WhatamIdoing (talk) 18:57, 11 September 2025 (UTC)
- Leaving aside that the entire first paragraph of this is redundant, vague, and unsourced, and that the treatment gap is mentioned twice and only defined the second time, by editorializing I mean stuff like the treatment gap
underscoring the need for strengthened health systems and public health interventions
, which is written from an advocacy perspective. Stating that a specific societal change is a "need" is an opinion, not a fact. Other people may have different opinions about what "the need" is: loosened regulations on pharmaceutical companies, or decoupling health insurance from employment, or research into alternative medicine, or abolishing capitalism entirely, or patiently staying the course with no policy change, or even that the treatment gaps is not a problem so no change is necessary. The same goes forcost-effective treatment strategies
-- if someone can't afford treatment then by definition it's not "cost-effective" for them. Gnomingstuff (talk) 23:11, 11 September 2025 (UTC)- @Gnomingstuff Seeing as Whatamidoing has already debunked the editorializing claim, can you expand on
undue emphasis on symbolism, superficial analysis, etc., that imply inherent WP:OR and WP:SYNTH problems that violate Good Article criterion #2
. Specifically can you identify the the cases of OR and SYNTH that led you to open the reassessment. I'm not sure how to help here when you haven't pointed out the inherent OR/SYNTH. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 08:27, 14 September 2025 (UTC)- I literally just explained it. I don't know how else I am supposed to get across, for instance, the fact that stating something is a "need" is an opinion. Gnomingstuff (talk) 03:48, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- Okay I can see what you mean by the wording being odd (as Whatamidoing pointed out not all the odd wording is editorialization). I think the other odd wording may come from the fact that medical articles do say things like “cost effective treatment strategies” and “the need for…” and many people not well versed in medical talk then use those phrases, not understanding that the audience of a research paper is different than the audience of a wikipedia article.
- Please correct me if i’m wrong here as I’m just trying to understand the issue at hand, but is your issue the odd wording (i haven’t looked at it enough to call it editorialization)? because if that’s your main concern then that’s a pretty easy fix and i can get started on that.
- However you also mentioned that there is WP:OR and WP:SYNTH which you still haven’t shown evidence of. To make an claim of OR or SYNTH i’m assuming you looked at the sources and found that they did not support the claims being made, it would be helpful if you could just point out which sources and areas of text were the ones that led you to the conclusions of OR/SYNTH. I’m not asking for every instance of OR/SYNTH that you found, just whatever one led you to making that claim. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 07:46, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Gnomingstuff could i please get an update on this? I don’t want to get too into cleaning up the sources without knowing which ones had inappropriate SYNTH or OR attached to them. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 21:28, 17 September 2025 (UTC)
- I literally just explained it. I don't know how else I am supposed to get across, for instance, the fact that stating something is a "need" is an opinion. Gnomingstuff (talk) 03:48, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Gnomingstuff Seeing as Whatamidoing has already debunked the editorializing claim, can you expand on
- Leaving aside that the entire first paragraph of this is redundant, vague, and unsourced, and that the treatment gap is mentioned twice and only defined the second time, by editorializing I mean stuff like the treatment gap
- I'm really sorry, as English is not my main language, I have used LLM in order to translate the things. If this had been AI slop, I would have simply copied and pasted directly from a language model. Instead, I used it as a tool to assist with rewriting, and I reviewed and adjusted the text myself. At no point did I copy and paste output directly. While I cannot provide proof of this process, I am being transparent in stating that I used the tool solely to support rewriting. Given that Whatamidoing has already debunked the claims, could we please remove the notice? You will probably think I used AI for this too, but I am just autistic and verbose. Sorry again, I am very ashamed for this whole situation. Pwoli (talk) 01:05, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- I never said that you needed to be ashamed of anything, I was just citing the specific diffs that I was referring to. Gnomingstuff (talk) 03:52, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- Pwoli didn’t ever claim that you said they needed to be ashamed either. @Pwoli seems like they were just trying to help build the encyclopedia and because of english not being their main language and maybe not realizing they needed to adjust their language for Wikipedia may have used some wording that is indicative of AI. However just because something sounds like it could be AI doesn’t mean it is (which i know you know)and since we have now gotten confirmation that they did not copy and paste from AI I am going to go ahead and remove the banner until there is some evidence of AI usage. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 07:51, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- Pwoli didn’t ever claim that you said they needed to be ashamed either. @Pwoli seems like they were just trying to help build the encyclopedia and because of english not being their main language and maybe not realizing they needed to adjust their language for Wikipedia may have used some wording that is indicative of AI. However just because something sounds like it could be AI doesn’t mean it is (which i know you know)and since we have now gotten confirmation that they did not copy and paste from AI I am going to go ahead and remove the banner until there is some evidence of AI usage. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 07:51, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- I never said that you needed to be ashamed of anything, I was just citing the specific diffs that I was referring to. Gnomingstuff (talk) 03:52, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
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I was originally looking at the article seeing as it had a (now-declined) RFC, but then I noticed that the GA had a citation needed tag since October 2020, as well as some end-of-paragraphs not having a citation. The GAN was passed in 2008, and would likely be quickfailed under criteria 3 at its current state. This is my first GAN btw/ JuniperChill (talk) 18:54, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
- Delist. Whilst I believe some uses of {{citation needed}} are still passable under the GA criteria, I agree that this article is missing citations on too many claims, particularly at the end of paragraphs that should be cited. SnowyRiver28 (talk) 02:57, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
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(I've never done this before so apologies if I am doing it wrong.) I believe this article was generated by AI, an issue that goes back to the first version. While the article creator has denied using AI for at least some tasks, there are just too many indicators -- and not just involving language quirks, but larger issues of puffery and synthesis. While we don't have a policy prohibiting using AI in articles, I do not think this meets Good Article standards as it currently stands, and I don't think it met them at the time either.
The bulk of the text was created in 2023 and originates in diffs like this, and much of that text still remains; citations were added later. The prose displays many tells of LLM use, particularly the ones -- e.g., undue emphasis on symbolism, editorializing, superficial analysis -- that inherently imply WP:OR and WP:SYNTH problems. There are too many examples to list here, but as an example, the article claims that a political party's choice of candidates was reflecting the ongoing discussions about religious and regional balance in politics
. The source it's cited to does not mention anything about "ongoing discussion," being a largely analysis-free news update; literally, its only mention of religion is one word about the party platform. This kind of thing is just all over the place; elsewhere, the article asserts The nation's diversity is its strength, but the persistent use of such tickets can strain the delicate fabric of unity
as a fact despite being an opinion attributed to no one, and the article it is cited to does not mention anything about diversity or unity, primarily mentioning media coverage and election logistics. A statement that the choice of one candidate was seen as a strategy to appeal to the northern regions
is cited to a short news brief that, once again, mentions nothing even slightly related. All of this is very characteristic of trying to source synthesis after the fact.
As far as the good article criteria, WP:QF #3 doesn't count since I was the one who added the maintenance tag. But the issues above suggests the article doesn't meet criteria #2 or #4, nor did it at the time. Arguably it does not meet #1 because stuff like the nation's diverse socio-political fabric
, revolves around the delicate balance
, underscored the persistent debate
, etc. is cliched puffery and also not concise at all (another issue brought up in the original nomination). Gnomingstuff (talk) 18:02, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including statements tagged with "citation needed" since 2021 and entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 23:46, 8 September 2025 (UTC)
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Several uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 23:43, 8 September 2025 (UTC)
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Lots of uncited statements, including several entries in the "Popular culture" section. The lead is also quite short and does not summarise all major aspects of this article. Z1720 (talk) 23:42, 8 September 2025 (UTC)
Partly done I added missing citations and copy-edited the page. In regards to the lead section I couldn't come up with any missing points. It mentions Hamnet's death and its potential influence on Shakespeare's work. His "life" section has +2 more paragraphs but I don't think there are too important for the lead. We can mention the 2025 film about Hamnet, which is rather popular? —LastJabberwocky (Rrarr) 08:51, 17 September 2025 (UTC)
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Some uncited paragraphs, including the entire "In popular culture" section. Z1720 (talk) 23:39, 8 September 2025 (UTC)
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The lead is too short and does not cover all major aspects of the article. Meanwhile, there's an "Overview" section that could be merged with the lead and resolve this concern, but this information would need to be checked against the article body to ensure all information is cited in the article and trimmed for length concerns. The "Works" section is uncited, and the article is over 12,000 words in length, so it probably needs to be trimmed for information that is too detailed or can be summarised more effectively. Z1720 (talk) 02:06, 8 September 2025 (UTC)
- I would also add that there is a fair amount of reliance on primary sources (diary entries, contemporary army handbooks etc). In some cases these primary sources are the only source for a statement; at other times they are lumped in with other more reliable sources which points to WP:OVERCITE and WP:INTEGRITY issues. Vladimir.copic (talk) 04:00, 8 September 2025 (UTC)
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There are uncited statements throughout the article. There is an orange "expansion needed" banner from 2022 at the top of the "Myth interpretations" section. There are a lot of small, one sentence paragraphs, negatively affecting the readability of the article. These should be merged together or removed if the statement is not needed. Z1720 (talk) 17:37, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- Just on the citations point, the article already has over 400 of them plus around 50 entries in the bibliography. If anything, they need weeding out, perhaps seeing if the best sources have material that could be used instead of some of the weaker ones. I don't think that adding more references just to increase the density of citations/refs is a good idea. --Northernhenge (talk) 17:55, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Northernhenge: I do not think the GA criteria is concerned with the quality of the sources (as long as they are reliable) or if an article has too many. However, editors are encouraged to remove lower-quality sources if a higher-quality source can be used instead. However, all text in a good article should be sourced (with notable exceptions like the lead) which means the article will need additional inline citations and possibly additional sources. Z1720 (talk) 18:07, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- Yes, it's a worthy thought but it concerns neither GA nor GAR. Chiswick Chap (talk) 18:17, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Northernhenge: I do not think the GA criteria is concerned with the quality of the sources (as long as they are reliable) or if an article has too many. However, editors are encouraged to remove lower-quality sources if a higher-quality source can be used instead. However, all text in a good article should be sourced (with notable exceptions like the lead) which means the article will need additional inline citations and possibly additional sources. Z1720 (talk) 18:07, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- Keep, it's a rambling sea-beast of an article, but I've closed up a lot of short paragraphs, added refs, and removed a few bits of uncited or off-topic material. It should pass muster. Chiswick Chap (talk) 21:59, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- Thoughts Z1720? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:06, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Chiswick Chap and AirshipJungleman29: I added a few citation needed tags to some minor statements. The "Etymologies", section has a lot of short paragraphs and I think that section can be formatted more effectively. Once those are resolved I think this is ready for a keep. Z1720 (talk) 23:29, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
- Closed up the 'Etymologies' paragraphs and added refs to the minor statements. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:25, 11 September 2025 (UTC)
- Closed up the 'Etymologies' paragraphs and added refs to the minor statements. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:25, 11 September 2025 (UTC)
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Given it needs updating since 2016, I don't think this should stay a good article. Roast (talk) 23:05, 6 September 2025 (UTC)
- That marking is clearly incorrect as that chapter says: "In 2019, the Icelandic parliament passed the Gender Autonomy Act". So it was last updated in 2019.
- Iceland has an archive over old newspapers at timarit.is, and searching there with the local name of the comitttee, mannanafnanefnd, shows (https://timarit.is/?q=mannanafnanefnd&size=10&isAdvanced=false ) that icelandic newspapers covered it 49 times in 2020-2029 compared to 258 in 2010-2019. Most of those are just new names being added to the allowed names list, which is not noteworthy.
- I have a counter proposal. There was an attempt in 2020 to remove the comitee, which failed. I propose to add that, remove the outdated notice and close this reassesment as keep the good article status. Snævar (talk) 11:16, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- You changed my mind—I agree with the counterproposal. Roast (talk) 17:15, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- After taking a quick look through the article, I agree with Snævar's assessment above about adding the attempted removal of the committee. I would also like to rearrange the formatting of the article a little bit to make it easier to find information and to remove the "Controversies" heading, which might not be NPOV. Lastly, if there isn't a wiki-article on the list of approved names (I could not find one) I suggest that this article give information and statistics on what names have been approved (% of male-female-non-gendered names, how many new names are accepted or removed by the commmitee each year, etc.) Here's my suggestion for format: Lead, Composition and mission (if this section becomes too large, it can be split. This should only refer to the current composision and mission), History, List composition (where stats would be added). I also think the current lead is too short and needs to be expanded to cover all aspects of the article, regardless of what is included as headings. Thoughts? Z1720 (talk) 17:57, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- It is fine to have a vision, but there needs to be available sources for these improvements. There really is not a regularly updated statistic of approved names. Decisions made by the comitee are on https://www.stjornarradid.is/gogn/urskurdir-og-alit-/$LisasticSearch/Search/?SearchQuery=&Ministries=&Committee=Mannanafnanefnd&Year= and I think making a statistic out of that would run afoul of Wikipedia:No original research. There is a list of given names to newborns in an particular year since 2021 (https://www.skra.is/gogn/thjodskrargattin/vinsaelustu-nofnin/vinsaelustu-nofnin-2023/ is the link for 2023, the page is in Icelandic).
- It is unclear what you are planning with the History section.
- Icelandic Wikipedia has an outdated list of Icelandic names:
- Snævar (talk) 05:27, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
- After taking a quick look through the article, I agree with Snævar's assessment above about adding the attempted removal of the committee. I would also like to rearrange the formatting of the article a little bit to make it easier to find information and to remove the "Controversies" heading, which might not be NPOV. Lastly, if there isn't a wiki-article on the list of approved names (I could not find one) I suggest that this article give information and statistics on what names have been approved (% of male-female-non-gendered names, how many new names are accepted or removed by the commmitee each year, etc.) Here's my suggestion for format: Lead, Composition and mission (if this section becomes too large, it can be split. This should only refer to the current composision and mission), History, List composition (where stats would be added). I also think the current lead is too short and needs to be expanded to cover all aspects of the article, regardless of what is included as headings. Thoughts? Z1720 (talk) 17:57, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- You changed my mind—I agree with the counterproposal. Roast (talk) 17:15, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
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WP:CLOP identified at the DYK nom; courtesy ping to @RoySmith and AirshipJungleman29:. Launchballer 22:20, 3 September 2025 (UTC)
- I thought I had already fixed it. Is there anyone else who can help then? Floating Orb Talk! my edits 22:33, 3 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Launchballer and @RoySmith? Floating Orb Talk! my edits 01:14, 5 September 2025 (UTC)
- Hello? Is this Good article assessment still on? We don't have any consensus to change anything so I think we can close it now. Floating Orb Talk! my edits 00:15, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Launchballer? Floating Orb Talk! my edits 00:15, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
- No, there remains close paraphrasing in this. I notice @EEng: removed two of the gnarlier instances but some still remains. For example:
- "The most sold marmalade is bitter orange with the largest share of 55% of sales, 40% by sweet orange marmalade, and 5% in total for all other marmalades. The quickest-growing type is sweet orange marmalade, because of an increasing consumer preference for milder flavours." is still too close to "Among the different types of orange marmalade, Bitter Orange Marmalade held the largest share at 55%, followed by Sweet Orange Marmalade at 40%. The "Others" sub-segment, which includes mixed fruit marmalade, accounted for 5%. The fastest-growing sub-segment was Sweet Orange Marmalade, driven by increasing consumer preference for milder flavors."
- "Asia Pacific is the fastest-growing region, from growing customer sales in countries like China and India." is too close to "Asia Pacific emerged as the fastest-growing region, driven by rising consumer demand in countries like China and India."
- "The narrator mocks the mother and child “that she could taste no greater delight than in making a fillagree basket for a spoilt child”" is too close to "The narrator mocks mother and child as well as the fawning Lucy Steele, whose behavior implies “that she could taste no greater delight than in making a fillagree basket for a spoilt child”".
- "The marmalade market lies in its versatility, cultural associations, and quality, making it a staple in households and gourmet menus around the world." is too close to "Its appeal lies in its versatility, premium quality, and cultural associations, making it a staple in households and gourmet menus worldwide."
- I also think the phrases "Robertson's was founded in 1864 by Paisley, Renfrewshire, grocer James Robertson and his wife Marion." and "authorise the use of the term "marmalade" as an alternative for “jam”" could be reworded as well.
- One solution to the first is "Most marmalade sold is bitter orange (55%), though the quickest growing type is sweet orange (40%) due to rising demand for milder flavors" (you could probably get away with leaving off "other flavours comprise 5%"); I'll leave you to think of how to deal with the others.--Launchballer 01:06, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you for giving me the suggestions. I fixed a couple of them here. Floating Orb Talk! my edits 03:28, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Launchballer Floating Orb Talk! my edits 14:07, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
- Superficial modification I'm afraid, and only of some of them.--Launchballer 14:12, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
- Superficial modification I'm afraid, and only of some of them.--Launchballer 14:12, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
- No, there remains close paraphrasing in this. I notice @EEng: removed two of the gnarlier instances but some still remains. For example:
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As a 2012 nomination, this one hasn't held up.
- Very choppy prose. Lots of one- and two- sentence paragraphs.
- 21st century needs a copy edit. Lots of "In year, this happened. In year, that happened." type prose.
- Despite almost all of his singles having articles, many are not linked in the text.
- The article is very sparse on critical reception, themes of his music, vocal type, and other basic information on the structure of his albums.
- Lots and lots of unsourced sections.
- "Stated on Finding Your Roots" -- exactly how is one to verify this?
- Awards table should be split into its own page.
- Several unusable sources such as YouTube and Amazon. I already pruned a personal blog.
- ETA: Reviewer was blocked as a sockpuppet, and nominator has been inactive since 2014.
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There are lots of uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. The "History" section stops in the 1800s. Is there any additional information to add from the article from the 1900s or 2000s? Any information that should be added about post-WWII migration? The "Demographics" section doesn't have post-2008 information, so this section probably needs to be updated. Z1720 (talk) 01:16, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. At over 14,000 words long, the article needs to be trimmed of too much detail. Z1720 (talk) 01:12, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
- Keep Good Article With how good his career has been, and all the notable events and moments in his career, I honestly don't see how it could be trimmed. Servite et contribuere (talk) 23:50, 11 September 2025 (UTC)
- Keep for now. This article has just over 15,000 words, which is in the 'Almost certainly should be divided or trimmed.' category on WP:TOOBIG, though I don't really see where this article can be trimmed as mentioned above. I also feel this article is sufficiently broken up into sections that are one or two paragraphs long that the length isn't as much of an issue as it would be on articles that are just huge walls of unbroken text.
- Could you provide examples of the uncited claims made in the article? SnowyRiver28 (talk) 14:16, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Servite et contribuere and SnowyRiver28: I have added "citation needed" templates in the article after the phrases and paragraphs that are missing citations. These need to be resolved before I can recommend a keep designation. As for the length: the article does not need a paragraph (or multiple paragraphs) for each tour and tournament in which he participated in per year. Instead, the biography should summarise the most notable events in his career and other information should be moved to other articles or removed as too detailed. Z1720 (talk) 15:25, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- Whoa, I can see where citations are missing now, no idea how I didn't notice that before! Thanks for adding the tags :)
- Whilst GA criteria doesn't require all citations to be absolutely perfect (it allows for some citation needed tags), I think the sheer number of them present here (roughly 40) means something is amiss. I might have a go at adding some citations to the article and I'll reply here if I make any significant progress.
- As for the trimming, I do see your point about not needing such detail for tours and games, particularly when they have their own main articles. I would agree that it can be trimmed to only include detail that is important and specific to the subject, and that content that describes the game or series on a more general scale can be removed and left for its main article. SnowyRiver28 (talk) 00:29, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
- SnowyRiver28 It is 1:27AM where I am so I might not reply to your next reply till later, but basically what I am arguing is that there are some articles where over 15,000 words might be acceptable. Smith is known for his unorthodox batting style, comparisons to Don Bradman, and much more (But I am somewhat tired and just a bit hungry so might not be at be my best RN) like initially being an All Rounder, but he still did some bowling, although he hasn't bowled in Test Cricket since 2023. I might be able to find some to trim. Servite et contribuere (talk) 15:42, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Servite et contribuere and SnowyRiver28: I have added "citation needed" templates in the article after the phrases and paragraphs that are missing citations. These need to be resolved before I can recommend a keep designation. As for the length: the article does not need a paragraph (or multiple paragraphs) for each tour and tournament in which he participated in per year. Instead, the biography should summarise the most notable events in his career and other information should be moved to other articles or removed as too detailed. Z1720 (talk) 15:25, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. There's also an "updated needed" orange banner at the top of the "Modern overview" section, where the 2020 census demographic information should be added. The article is also almost 10,000 words long, and I think some information can be trimmed like older census information or promotional/touristy prose. Z1720 (talk) 01:09, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
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The article has lots of short, one-sentence paragraphs, especially in the later "History" sections that should be merged together. Some of these are uncited so that will need to be resolved while the mergers take place. There is also no post-2013 information: on the talk page, it was mentioned that this sometimes happens when there's no historical information to mention, but a Google search yielded some results about its infustructure and the Pulaski Skyway article (which carries the route) has some post-2013 information in it, so I think this article can be updated. Z1720 (talk) 00:43, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
- Delist The sourcing is just so poor that the entire article would need rewriting if this were fixed. Around 22 out of the 36 sources used are primary (maps, government statements, laws etc). This for instance is the most cited source. Another two sources are literally pictures of road signs! The article is essentially original research drawing on primary sources. Vladimir.copic (talk) 02:05, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
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This is an older GA nomination from 2008 and the lighter standard can be seen in the article. The article is quite bloated for the limited sourcing, and many sections rely on one source for its content. It's unfortunately just not at the standard I would have thought reflect GA anymore.
- The article's lead is enormous.
- The gameplay section is substantially cited from one source and contains half an uncited paragraph.
- The development section is substantially based on one interview source, with almost all three paragraphs attributed to this source.
- The Reception section is fine and uses valid sources, although can't decide whether it wants to group or synthesise review reactions or just list them off one by one.
- The Planned Sequel section is based off of one source, with some information, like the planned Q4 2010 release date not being covered in the source.
- The article is horribly outdated, with content like " The company also revealed plans to continue developing free games with a development time of four to eight weeks. The most popular of these games will be further developed and released on platforms such as WiiWare, PlayStation Network or Xbox Live Arcade" and that the remaster "will most likely not see the light of the day" being inappropriate and outdated speculation. VRXCES (talk) 12:03, 30 August 2025 (UTC)
- Delist The sources in it currently are unreliable/trivial, it needs a full rewrite using the sources I have put on the talk page. Right now it certainly fails GA criteria. ᴢxᴄᴠʙɴᴍ (ᴛ) 16:57, 31 August 2025 (UTC)
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There are uncited statements in the article, including entire paragraphs. The entire Articles of capitulation are quoted in the article, without much context for important sections (except for a controversy about article 10). I think a summarised version highlighting the most important aspects, as identified in secondary sources, would be more appropriate. Z1720 (talk) 14:56, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- The Overview was split off from the lead in 2023 by a longtime well experienced user who I presumptively will assume should have realized that putting entire paragraphs without citations into the body of the article would degrade it. But apparently the editor was so focused on cutting the lead that the flaw didn't come to mind. The edit summary shows that the user thought the lead was too long and that was the reason for splitting the "overview" out. Now it seems to me that the lead is too short for a long article. I think the lead likely would not be too long if most of the overview text was restored to it. Also, since the overview material came from the lead, much of the content in that section should be, and probably is, repeated or summarized later in the article with citations. The fix is probably to put the uncited material back into the lead, with any required editing, and to put any remaining material not already in the body into the body with any needed citations and omission of anything that is duplicated but not necessary for the lead.
- It seems to me that a summarized version of the articles of capitulation, with citations as needed, as your suggest, is a revision that should be made.
- I am confident that I have the sources available in my home library (and via JSTOR if necessary) for any needed citations.
- I am preparing to give an hour long presentation on September 9, and have written that I should be able to add needed citations and/or rewrite later sections of P.G.T. Beauregard. I have some coordinator tasks that I have been doing as the months come to a close - and some real life to fit in. So I may not be able to get to this for at least two weeks. That will still be within the usual time to start work on editing an article up for reassessment.
- I think this is likely to be an article that would be of interest to other editors who may be able and willing to work on it sooner, although I should get to it in good time if not. Donner60 (talk) 06:37, 29 August 2025 (UTC)
- I have a copy of Greene's work on the battle published by Savas Beatie on the way. I will take a look here once that arrives. Hog Farm Talk 22:20, 6 September 2025 (UTC)
- It will be about another week before I can do any work on this. I need to do the work on the P.G.T. Beauregard reassessment first, among a few other Wikipedia and real life tasks. I do consider this of top importance to U.S. (and perhaps even British) military history. Donner60 (talk) 20:03, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
- It will be about another week before I can do any work on this. I need to do the work on the P.G.T. Beauregard reassessment first, among a few other Wikipedia and real life tasks. I do consider this of top importance to U.S. (and perhaps even British) military history. Donner60 (talk) 20:03, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
- I have a copy of Greene's work on the battle published by Savas Beatie on the way. I will take a look here once that arrives. Hog Farm Talk 22:20, 6 September 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 14:45, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- It seems like an easy enough fix; did you make sure to notify Masem ahead of time when you raised the issue on the 15th? - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 16:23, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Cukie Gherkin: While the GAR instructions ask editors to consider posting a notice on an article's talk page, it is not required, nor is contacting or pinging an editor prior to opening a GAR. Pinging and posting on user talk pages yield mixed results: some respond positively, some question why I did not fix it myself (which is a different discussion), some are annoyed that I pinged them and asked that I stop, and some don't respond. If anyone thinks notifying an editor before opening a GAR should be required, I invite them to open a thread at WT:GA. Note that I would probably oppose this as it adds another bureaucratic step to the GAR process, and I think if editors care about an article's status, they should maintain the article without prompts. Masem did receive a notice from the GAR helper script after this GAR was opened. Z1720 (talk) 17:11, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Cukie Gherkin: While the GAR instructions ask editors to consider posting a notice on an article's talk page, it is not required, nor is contacting or pinging an editor prior to opening a GAR. Pinging and posting on user talk pages yield mixed results: some respond positively, some question why I did not fix it myself (which is a different discussion), some are annoyed that I pinged them and asked that I stop, and some don't respond. If anyone thinks notifying an editor before opening a GAR should be required, I invite them to open a thread at WT:GA. Note that I would probably oppose this as it adds another bureaucratic step to the GAR process, and I think if editors care about an article's status, they should maintain the article without prompts. Masem did receive a notice from the GAR helper script after this GAR was opened. Z1720 (talk) 17:11, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
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The article contains lots of in-universe information. The plot summary is over 1,300 words, which exceeds the recommended length at MOS:PLOT. There is also lots of in-universe information for each individual character, which I think can be reduced Z1720 (talk) 05:33, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
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The article hasn't been updated since 2015. However, The City of Chicago website about the space lists several past exhibits from 2015 to the present day. The lead could also be expanded to include more information about the topic. Z1720 (talk) 05:26, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
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The "History" section does not have much post-1970s information. When I looked for sources online, I found news stories about how the school is decreasing in numbers and selling its real estate, but also past events like a film produced by its students screened at Sundance and retrospectives during the 50th anniversary. The "Reception" section also only includes perspectives from the 2000s: I think the article should include opinions from when the school opened and recent reviews of the school. Further exploration of sources will probably find additional information about the 1980s-present day that should be added. Z1720 (talk) 05:20, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- I think that might be a matter of organization. The sale of the building is mentioned in the high school program section. The "History" section is more of an "Overview" since the Program is also technically the History of the institution. Can you link to these news stories you found? czar 14:06, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- Here's some links, though I encourage interested editors to search themselves: [3], [4], [5], [6], [7], Making It Up as We Go Along: The Story of the Albany Free School, Political and Civic Engagement among Free School Alumni: A Range of Outcomes, Do Free Schools Promote Chaos?. These were found after a quick search. GAs do not need to be complete, but they do need to cover all major aspects of the topic and I think there are several gaps missing in the article, as outlined in my original statement. Z1720 (talk) 14:37, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- Briefly, I don't find these to be major gaps, since they're already covered in part. The "Making It Up as We Go Along" author is affiliated with the school and the other sources are local news filling in minor details. Reviews of schools at their opening is not traditionally something that would appear in reliable sources. I can reorganize it if it's causing a readability issue. czar 00:24, 6 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Czar: Thanks for your analysis of the sources. Normally I would agree with your comments about the reviews at its opening, but AFS was/is a very unique and controversial school structure. I think critical commentary of the school at its opening is notable and relevant. Z1720 (talk) 18:02, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Czar: Thanks for your analysis of the sources. Normally I would agree with your comments about the reviews at its opening, but AFS was/is a very unique and controversial school structure. I think critical commentary of the school at its opening is notable and relevant. Z1720 (talk) 18:02, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- Briefly, I don't find these to be major gaps, since they're already covered in part. The "Making It Up as We Go Along" author is affiliated with the school and the other sources are local news filling in minor details. Reviews of schools at their opening is not traditionally something that would appear in reliable sources. I can reorganize it if it's causing a readability issue. czar 00:24, 6 September 2025 (UTC)
- Here's some links, though I encourage interested editors to search themselves: [3], [4], [5], [6], [7], Making It Up as We Go Along: The Story of the Albany Free School, Political and Civic Engagement among Free School Alumni: A Range of Outcomes, Do Free Schools Promote Chaos?. These were found after a quick search. GAs do not need to be complete, but they do need to cover all major aspects of the topic and I think there are several gaps missing in the article, as outlined in my original statement. Z1720 (talk) 14:37, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited text, including entire sections. MOS:OVERSECTION in the "Mesoscale" section. Z1720 (talk) 05:18, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- Will be fixing it up shortly, would hate to see this get demoted. EF5 15:11, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- @EF5: Do we think the mesoscale section might benefit from a section-transclusion from the main articles? 🐔 Chicdat Bawk to me! 15:47, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- Yes, that sounds like a good idea. EF5 15:50, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- No longer any uncited text. Ce'd a lot of it. 🐔 Chicdat Bawk to me! 13:24, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
- No longer any uncited text. Ce'd a lot of it. 🐔 Chicdat Bawk to me! 13:24, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
- Yes, that sounds like a good idea. EF5 15:50, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- @EF5: Do we think the mesoscale section might benefit from a section-transclusion from the main articles? 🐔 Chicdat Bawk to me! 15:47, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
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Hilaria is featured in The Baldwins, but this article only has one line about it in the lead. Information about her involvement with the show should be added to the Career section. When looking for sources, I found an event in 2021 where Hilaria was interupted by/interupted her husband at a red carpet event. Many pop culture news outlets covered the event, but this article does not have information about it. I suggest that this be mentioned in the article. There doesn't seem to be much post-2019 career information. Besides The Baldwins mentioned above, is there other information to add here? Some unreliable sources are used in the article like Meaww, Hola! and New York Post. These should be replaced by reliable source. The lead does not summarise all major aspects of the article. Z1720 (talk) 05:05, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
an event in 2021 where Hilaria was interupted by/interupted her husband at a red carpet event.
Seems like that event would fall under WP:NOTNEWS/WP:NOTDIARY. Some1 (talk) 02:00, 10 September 2025 (UTC)- @Some1: When I did a search for sources, this event was mentioned by several sources: some included critical commentary as a possible example (or how it should not be an example) of Mansplaining/manturupting (sources: [8], [9], [10].) I think the extensive coverage of the event means this should be mentioned in the article.
- Also worth noting that Baldwin is a contestant on the upcoming season of Dancing with the Stars so information about that will also need to be added to the article. Z1720 (talk) 17:08, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- Toronto Sun (your first link) is a tabloid newspaper, and the other two sources don't constitute "extensive coverage". I agree with you, though, that her being a contestant on the upcoming season of DWTS should be mentioned in the article and am actually surprised that it hasn't been added yet (I had actually came to this article because of the DWTS cast reveal!). I'll get the DWTS stuff added to the article. Some1 (talk) 17:27, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- Toronto Sun (your first link) is a tabloid newspaper, and the other two sources don't constitute "extensive coverage". I agree with you, though, that her being a contestant on the upcoming season of DWTS should be mentioned in the article and am actually surprised that it hasn't been added yet (I had actually came to this article because of the DWTS cast reveal!). I'll get the DWTS stuff added to the article. Some1 (talk) 17:27, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
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There are uncited statements in the article, including most of the "Americas folk metal" section. Unreliable sources used in the article, including www.metal-archives.com, www.spirit-of-metal.com, and ONSP. Z1720 (talk) 05:02, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- I would delete the "Americas folk metal" section, as all it adds is a load of redlinks. I’ve only left it because this discussion is taking place. --Northernhenge (talk) 10:07, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
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Some uncited paragraphs and other uncited statements. Z1720 (talk) 04:48, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
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Several uncited statements and paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 04:46, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- I've added some citations. I'll continue to add more citations to this. If there is anything else you feel needs improving, let me know! LunaExplorer (talk) 19:04, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- Feel free to ping me when ready for a re-review. Z1720 (talk) 20:44, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- Feel free to ping me when ready for a re-review. Z1720 (talk) 20:44, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including most of the "2007 mini-tour releases" section. Z1720 (talk) 15:39, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
- Delist – I know it's early to say but I'm honestly surprised this became a GA to begin with. The reviewed version was practically the same as it is now. However, the entire "2007 minitour releases" section was absent: I assume that was merged into here from a previously deleted page. Even without that though, critical reception has only had one review in prose since its promotion (unacceptable even by 2013 Wikipedia standards); the general prose, although thoroughly sourced, isn't exactly sourced by quality ones. The article realistically needs a complete overhaul to keep GA status by today's standards, and I don't have the interest in doing so. – zmbro (talk) (cont) 19:59, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
- I was going to check out what Z brought forth, once again at the behest of the now-retired nominator, but after zmbro's points I don't know if I have it in me to fix the whole thing. mftp dan oops 12:54, 31 August 2025 (UTC)
- So, I have some time on Saturday afternoon (EDT) to address whatever concerns there are with this. Doesn't look frightfully difficult. But you can expect me then. mftp dan oops 17:04, 11 September 2025 (UTC)
- So, I have some time on Saturday afternoon (EDT) to address whatever concerns there are with this. Doesn't look frightfully difficult. But you can expect me then. mftp dan oops 17:04, 11 September 2025 (UTC)
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Lots of uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. At over 11,000 words, this article is too detailed and WP:TOOBIG. I suggest that information be spun out, summarised more effectively or removed. Z1720 (talk) 15:25, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 14:27, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 14:26, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Article is over 11,000 words and could be summarised more effectively. Demographic information is from 2011 and needs to be updated. "Sites of interest" section seems to have a promotional tone. Z1720 (talk) 14:24, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720, There's a lot of work to be done on this. I will chip in as soon as I've finished getting another UK delisted GA done (currently waiting on the reviewer's close). Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 01:01, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- I've already given the lead a very brief CE, and updated the Wikilinks. However:
- • It is verbose, the language is not sufficiently succinct
- • It contains too much detail that should be in the body (the lead should summarise what is to come in the article)
- IMO this probably reflects much of the style of the rest of the article. See a snapshot of its its listing as GA in February 2019. A further 539 new edits made since. Although the article has not been delisted, the scope of the work to be done is possibly as much as a full GAN. I'm not the assessor but for anyone who also wishes to help out, I'm posting this basic GAN checklist of possible items to be addressed. If you make any improvements, to avoid duplication or edit conflicts please add a {{done}}, or {{fixed}} or a {{doing}} template, plus a brief description and your signature (~~~~). Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 03:25, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
There is massive duplication in the lead and the main sections. There is so much detail in the history it would be preferable to split it off into a separate page History of Berkhamsted, and leave a shorter, summarised history in the parent article. There is no miniumm size requirement for GA and with a little bit of work this article will retain its GA status. As a consequence, I have removed the huge history from the lead and redistributed its parts to the relevant history sub sections. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 19:22, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- Article at History of Berkhamsted has been created. The history here can now be edited down to a readable size for a town article. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 20:15, 28 August 2025 (UTC)
- I've reduced the history section by 46% but it can still probably sustain significantly more pruning. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 13:52, 29 August 2025 (UTC)
- Section 'Sites of interest' renamed 'Historic buildings' and bulleted list converted to prose (MoS). Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 16:10, 29 August 2025 (UTC)
- Most sections cleared of superflous detail (especially from items that have their own articles) and restructured for better page clarity. Unsourcable items removed. Still to do: Section 'Demography', 'Economy and commerce', check for images still needing alt text. Entire article (text) is now 46% of the original GA without losing any essential content. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 12:46, 30 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720, I now have the datata for updating the demnographics. I'll insert them as soon as I have time. Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 14:03, 12 September 2025 (UTC)
I have added citations to most of the previously uncited statements. Dormskirk (talk) 14:21, 13 September 2025 (UTC)
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No information about her death in the article body as well as missing information about later aspects of her career. Z1720 (talk) 14:18, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
- I have added body text reference to her death year and an additional reliable source on that. A brief search of available online sources doesn't turn up anything from a non-commercvial gallery source to add to what's in the article. hamiltonstone (talk) 12:30, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, especially entire paragraphs in the "Reformations: 1994–present" section. Z1720 (talk) 14:15, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. There are some unreliable sources used in the article like sbnation, PR newswire and a wordpress source. At over 13,000 words, this article is too detailed and WP:TOOBIG. Can any of the information be spun out, summarised more effectively, or removed as too much detail? Z1720 (talk) 14:01, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
- I think that the article definitely needs a lot of refinement and editing. I'd be happy to work on it, but as it's so large it wouldn't be overnight—whether that affects or does not affect the reassessment, I'm not sure. I'm assuming that if good article status was removed it could then be added back once the article is at a higher standard? PunkAndromeda (talk) 00:55, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
- @PunkAndromeda: Thanks for offering to work on this. A GAR will remain open while edits are ongoing. Feel free to ping me if there are any questions or ths article is ready for a re-review. Z1720 (talk) 01:28, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
- @PunkAndromeda: Thanks for offering to work on this. A GAR will remain open while edits are ongoing. Feel free to ping me if there are any questions or ths article is ready for a re-review. Z1720 (talk) 01:28, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
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There's uncited text, including entire paragraphs and sections. The article has lots of block quotes. These should be written in summary style or reduced in size to its most important aspects. At over 14,000 words, this article is too detailed and WP:TOOBIG. I suggest that text be spun out, summarised more effectively, or removed. Heritage Foundation is used as a source, which is considered unreliable on English Wikipedia. This citation should be replaced or its text removed. Z1720 (talk) 13:52, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
- As always, thanks for the detailed nomination laying out a roadmap for needed improvements, Z1720. Fairly confident that I am finished with Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Legal history of cannabis in the United States/1, so I can commit to taking this on, albeit slowly. I plan to use Barron and Dienes' First Amendment Law in a Nutshell for guidance on the major cases, given that there are hundreds of SCOTUS opinions in this area. I also hope to reduce direct citations to cases themselves if not outright eliminate them in favor of more clearly secondary sources like law review articles. ViridianPenguin🐧 (💬) 23:16, 18 September 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 13:45, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
- Along with the considerable uncited text, there is image jamming, which is often an indicator that no one is maintaining the article. Unless someone takes this on, it looks like a delist. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 10:28, 29 August 2025 (UTC)
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Lots of uncited statements, including entire paragraphs and the "Southern Oscillation" section. Z1720 (talk) 13:43, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
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Filmography section is unsourced and is also not up-to-date based on his IMDb (which has a different birth date). Sahaib (talk) 07:45, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
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Almost the entire "Debate" section is uncited, which includes block quotes. Z1720 (talk) 17:43, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
- I have added the citations. They were there, but just one at the beginning of each section instead of the expected one for each paragraph. Antony–22 (talk⁄contribs) 22:40, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
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Lots of uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 17:40, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, some of which have been tagged with "citation needed" since 2024. The "Career" section stops at 2016, although the "Awards and nominations" section mentions several post-2016 awards she has won, so I think this section needs to be updated. Z1720 (talk) 17:21, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
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Lots of uncited paragraphs. There are also lots of long sections that should be broken up with headings and short one-sentence paragraphs throughout. Z1720 (talk) 17:16, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
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- Lots of uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. There is also a "single source" orange banner at the top of the "Ancient India" section. Z1720 (talk) 17:13, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
- Took a look, and noted the following:
- Engvar: was mixed, but majority UK English. I've done a copyedit to gravitate all the engvar differences I could find to UK English. I may not have found all of them of course. - MPF (talk) 14:12, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
- Formatting: the page preview gave me 3x "Script warning: One or more {{cite book}} templates have errors; messages may be hidden". I couldn't find the messages (presumably hidden!); they need finding, and dealing with. - MPF (talk) 14:12, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
- Refs format - these are in a format style I'm not familiar with; the one ref I added (for the exact title translation of Mendel's work) needs reformatting to the page style, please! - MPF (talk) 14:12, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
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There is an "update" needed banner from 2021. It seems like this BLP has continued as a professional coach for the Hamilton Tiger-Cats in 2024, so there is probably information that can be added. Z1720 (talk) 16:28, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
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This article, which was promoted in 2009, has since then accumulated a number of maintenance tags related to uncited material, with several of those tags dating back to 2010 and 2011. In its present state, the article does not meet the WP:Good article criteria (in particular, 2b). Pinging editors involved in the original GAN review that led to promotion and some additional major contributors: @Cirt, Peregrine Fisher, BOZ, Hiding, Casliber, EyeSerene, Tenebrae, Clayton Emery, Kchishol1970, Kaijan, and Mark Staffieri:. TompaDompa (talk) 18:41, 20 August 2025 (UTC)
- I've added citations for all of the tags. FlairTale (talk) 02:43, 5 September 2025 (UTC)
- I am always wary of adding citations to uncited material—as opposed rewriting and adding citations—as experience shows that it is often something of a cosmetic fix. A brief spot-check reveals that this is also the case in this instance. Citing Wikisource:Comic book code of 1954 for the statement
To address public concerns, in 1954 the Comics Code Authority was created to regulate and curb sex, drugs and violence in comics, marking the start of a new era.
is not adequate. Likewise, the source added to the passageAjax/Farrell Publishing's 1954–55 revival of the Phantom Lady; Strong Man, published by Magazine Enterprises in 1955; Charlton Comics' Nature Boy, introduced in March 1956, and its revival of the Blue Beetle the previous year; and Atlas Comics' short-lived revivals of Captain America, the Human Torch, and the Sub-Mariner, beginning in Young Men Comics #24 (December 1953). In the United Kingdom, the Marvelman series was published from 1954 to 1963, substituting for the British reprints of the Captain Marvel stories after Fawcett stopped publishing the character's adventures.
only covers the Marvelman stuff. Those are just the first two newly-added citations I checked. TompaDompa (talk) 11:02, 6 September 2025 (UTC) - A few checks later, it is obvious that there are still massive sourcing issues here. TompaDompa (talk) 11:56, 6 September 2025 (UTC)
- I might also add that the "Collectibility" section contains a list of various magazine issues (presumably collectibles) without any clear inclusion criteria for that particular selection of issues. TompaDompa (talk) 15:56, 7 September 2025 (UTC)
- I am always wary of adding citations to uncited material—as opposed rewriting and adding citations—as experience shows that it is often something of a cosmetic fix. A brief spot-check reveals that this is also the case in this instance. Citing Wikisource:Comic book code of 1954 for the statement
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As noted on the talkpage, this is a very extensive article that includes within that extent unsourced text. Even within the apparently sourced text, there are issues, for example the Regional government source does not cover all its text. Other issues include the recent history section entering WP:PROSELINE, other areas having similar dated statements, and the overall article going into MOS:OVERSECTION. The WP:LEAD contains unique information rather than being a summary of the article. The length (>14,000 words) suggests this article does not "stay focused", and contributes to issues such as the unsourced text and the oversectioning. These issues would take significant work to fix. CMD (talk) 03:04, 17 August 2025 (UTC)
- This article was pretty lengthy when I last looked at it, and is now considerably lengthier. I don't mind that too much at GA level (quite another matter at FAC) but unsourced additions are another matter and decidedly a no-no. Tim riley talk 13:49, 17 August 2025 (UTC)
- @CMD, Tim riley: I have tried to fix WP:PROSELINE and the lead (although it probably should be rewritten); I'll try to fix the other issues soon. The article is probably a bit too long, but not by a lot: Boston (FA) contains just under 10,000 words, while Paris contains just over 14,000. Some of the difference is probably because there are more things to write about (as the capital city of France); I have proposed the "Culture" and "Infrastructure" sections to be split. Alpha Beta Delta Lambda (talk) 18:06, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
- Progress for cleanup by section (for my convenience):
- @CMD, Tim riley: I have tried to fix WP:PROSELINE and the lead (although it probably should be rewritten); I'll try to fix the other issues soon. The article is probably a bit too long, but not by a lot: Boston (FA) contains just under 10,000 words, while Paris contains just over 14,000. Some of the difference is probably because there are more things to write about (as the capital city of France); I have proposed the "Culture" and "Infrastructure" sections to be split. Alpha Beta Delta Lambda (talk) 18:06, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
Section Progress Comment Lead Not done
Needs to be rewritten. Etymology Done
Can't see any citation problem (if there is please tag it). History Not done
Q few claims need citation, some claims probably need to be moved to History of Paris, a claim needs to be clarified. Geography Done
Sourced and enough coverage. Administration Not done
A paragraph without cite, there are probably more claims without reference. Cityscape Not done
Several claims without cite. Demographics Maybe done
It appears well sourced but haven't thoroughly checked yet. Economics Education Culture Not done
Probably needs split and actually needs to address the culture of the city. Sport Mostly done
Spin-off from the culture section, mostly sourced but the Rugby League part may need some more. Infrastructure Not done
Probably needs a split, and if not OVERSECTION needs to be addressed. Also there are some claims without sources. International relations Not done
Needs some sources and cleanup, but not an overhaul.
- @Alpha Beta Delta Lambda: are you still interested in working on this? Z1720 (talk) 13:55, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 Sorry, no. You can close this GAR as demoted now. Alpha Beta Delta Lambda (talk) 21:13, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 Sorry, no. You can close this GAR as demoted now. Alpha Beta Delta Lambda (talk) 21:13, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
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This article has a 2500 word long section which is entirely uncited, in addition to numerous other uncited paragraphs. IAWW (talk) 08:36, 16 August 2025 (UTC)
- I boldly purged several unsourced paragraphs that had been added by Ddddemonstrate and their socks between 2022 and 2024. However, this does not necessarily mean the GA status should be kept, as many other sentences remain unsourced, and the recent edit warring may be indicative of missing or disputed information in the article. Yue🌙 04:21, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
- i have cited all the citation needed tags as well as removed words that fall out of context. I think this is good to go! Do you still find any other issue? Safari ScribeEdits! Talk! 15:11, 4 September 2025 (UTC)
- Lol, just as I was doing the same. Looks good now Kowal2701 (talk) 15:23, 4 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Yue, @Kowal2701 and @SafariScribe thanks so much for your work on this article. I went through and fixed dead links and added some maintenance tags to any issues I found while doing that. The following tags are currently on the article:
- 1 [permanent dead link]
- 2 [citation needed]
- 3 [better source needed]
- I will now do a spot check to see if the sourcing issues remain. Spot check numbers are based on this version.
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completely unrelated at least on the page cited and those near it
- [32]:
I see no discussion on etymology
- [57]:
doesn't support "Igbo-Ukwu has one of the oldest glass productions in West Africa". Also, "over 600 prestige objects including complex cast copper-alloy sculptures and more than 165,000 glass and carnelian beads" is almost a word for word copy of the source which is copyvio
- [141]: I don't know, the source is ten pages long and I don't want to read through the whole thing. A page number would be useful.
- [149]:
doesn't support "Everyday houses were made of mud with thatched roofs and bare earth floors with carved design doors. Some houses had elaborate designs both in the interior and exterior"
- These were the only five checks I did, so it's clear the source-text integrity issues run deep into this article. I think a full check of every citation will be needed to be confident this article is up to GA standards. IAWW (talk) 18:38, 4 September 2025 (UTC)
- If 80% of the refs are misrepresented, then this doesn’t seem salvageable barring a complete rewrite Kowal2701 (talk) 19:47, 4 September 2025 (UTC)
- It's worth noting that I didn't spot check many journals due to access issues. Those citations may have better TSI, though I don't think it matters that much. IAWW (talk) 08:47, 5 September 2025 (UTC)
- If 80% of the refs are misrepresented, then this doesn’t seem salvageable barring a complete rewrite Kowal2701 (talk) 19:47, 4 September 2025 (UTC)
- @It is a wonderful world, @Kowal2701, and @Yue, I will do the source review. Safari ScribeEdits! Talk! 19:24, 5 September 2025 (UTC)
- I'm not really sure what the point of a source review is as part of this GAR if the article doesn't pass the spot check IAWW (talk) 22:25, 5 September 2025 (UTC)
- When I say source review, I mean finding sources that doesn't work or meet our source criteria and adding a better reliable one. Safari ScribeEdits! Talk! 00:06, 6 September 2025 (UTC)
- I'm not really sure what the point of a source review is as part of this GAR if the article doesn't pass the spot check IAWW (talk) 22:25, 5 September 2025 (UTC)
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- The sources for "Demographics" are absolutely good to go
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After being heavily cut down since it got accepted, this article desperately needs a GAR. The writing feels weird IMO, and the lead certainly not suitable, almost being longer than the body itself and also having information not stated later. - Dents (talk2me 🖂) he/him btw!!! 10:38, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
- It looks like the article was massively cut in this revision, which seems to have a fair point about the background going slightly overboard with detail, but went about addressing it in an overly-aggressive manner. Given that this EP hasn't received much traction since its original release (i.e. little has changed), and that the version before this deletion seems suitable enough for GA status, would reverting the article back to this point be sufficient for bypassing GAR? This is more of a thought, I have little vested interest in this particular article. Leafy46 (talk) 01:34, 14 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Dentsinhere43: I've decided to boldly re-add the section, and gave the article an overall trim. It may not be perfect, but I think that it's of sufficient quality to retain its green badge. What do you think? Leafy46 (talk) 20:24, 15 August 2025 (UTC)
- I've copyedited it a bit, and it seems fine for a GA now. - Dents (talk2me 🖂) he/him btw!!! 21:53, 15 August 2025 (UTC)
- Great! I've also just re-vamped the 'Music and lyrics' section (after your copyedit), if you want to take a look at that too. Leafy46 (talk) 22:29, 15 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Dentsinhere43: Have you concerns been resolved? Z1720 (talk) 14:13, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- After a re-read and a spotcheck, I think it's fine now. - Dents (talk2me 🖂) he/him btw!!! 08:29, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- After a re-read and a spotcheck, I think it's fine now. - Dents (talk2me 🖂) he/him btw!!! 08:29, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Dentsinhere43: Have you concerns been resolved? Z1720 (talk) 14:13, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- Great! I've also just re-vamped the 'Music and lyrics' section (after your copyedit), if you want to take a look at that too. Leafy46 (talk) 22:29, 15 August 2025 (UTC)
- I've copyedited it a bit, and it seems fine for a GA now. - Dents (talk2me 🖂) he/him btw!!! 21:53, 15 August 2025 (UTC)
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Lots of uncited statements, including the first two paragraphs in "Political views after the end of the Civil War" and a block quote in "Louisiana Unification Movement". Z1720 (talk) 04:18, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
- I have only skimmed this but "Political views after the war" grabbed my attention. It could almost be entirely deleted or in the alternative would need to be rewritten. Almost none of the section is about his views. The end of the final unreferenced sentence in the second, long paragraph "had the threat looming of being arrested, exiled, or executed by the Federal Government for having joined the Confederacy" is utter nonsense. No soldier who accepted the parole at the end of the war and took the oath of allegiance was under threat of punishment, much less execution, or had any looming threat of execution or any other serious punishment. True that Robert E. Lee was under threat and some action was started against him. However, Grant, the most popular man in the country, said he would resign if action were taken against Lee since Grant had paroled the entire Army of Northern Virginia, including Lee, who took the oath (although he waited until October 1865 to do so). That put an end to any notion of prosecuting Lee and presumably any other soldier in the same position. Even Jefferson Davis himself, after spending two years in prison, was released even though he never took the oath of allegiance. So, for me, that brings into question, not just the sourcing and relevance of the section, but even whether it is totally accurate.
- I think that sentences in "Legacy" that cannot be sourced should just be eliminated as superfluous. That has been done in another article recently.
- I have eight of the sources listed in the references, including the Williams biography. A few others appear to be available online. As I have time, I likely can provide some citations. There may be obscure additions in the non-military related sections that may be hard to source, but these perhaps could be omitted if so.
- I have a busy schedule, in addition to any of my usual coordinator work, over the next three of four weeks, but I think at least some of the needed work may not take much time. I am rather sure this GAR will attract other editors who are interested in the American Civil War and may be able to fix problems sooner. Donner60 (talk) 19:13, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Donner60: Thanks for your comments. This will remain open as long as editors are interested in fixing it up. There's no rush to delist. Z1720 (talk) 19:35, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
- After a closer look, it seems that the problems occur after the military career sections. That will eliminate at least some, but probably not all, of the cited sources as useful references for citations. Donner60 (talk) 02:52, 14 August 2025 (UTC)
- Donner, please let me know if there's something you're struggling to source. I don't have a whole lot of time for a sustained project right now, but I do have the ability to make a library run now and then. Hog Farm Talk 02:19, 15 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Donner60 and Hog Farm: Are you still interested in fixing up this article? It seems like edits have stalled. Z1720 (talk) 14:12, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- I think this is still fixable. The main uncited content left is in the section about post-war political views; the sentence about him risking execution is dubious and I have removed it, along with a trivial unsourced statement about a movie from the legacy section. The other uncited text in that section is largely generic stuff about Reconstruction in Louisiana that shouldn't be overly hard to cite . I've made a gloss of what SCV camps are and have removed the further explanation tag. One source which is used three times is self-published and I have tagged it as so - of the uses two are also matched with citations to Williams and the other is the English translation of the poem. Donner or Z1720 - are there any objections to removing the long block quote poem? I'm not sure if quoting at that length is really warranted. Hog Farm Talk 21:16, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Hog Farm: I'd remove it. It's not immediately evident why it is there, so it is better to remove as this is not wikiquote. Z1720 (talk) 21:41, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 and Hog Farm: I am still interested in fixing this article. I had to do considerable work in the past few weeks on a rather lengthy presentation about the end of World War II. It was for the 80th anniversary of Japan's formal surrender and I had some interesting items to show as well. I also had to be prepared for questions. I have had a few coordinator tasks and some real life to attend to as well. This week I should have time to see if I can add the needed citations. In fact, I had it up on my screen to refresh my memory on what is needed when I saw your message. I think that there is not much more needed other than citations and a little editing or deleting in later sections. I agree that it is best to remove the block quote. I do want to finish this as quickly as possible so I can work on the Siege of Yorktown article, which I believe is of top importance. It came up later than this one so I had placed in second in line for my attention. Donner60 (talk) 23:01, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- As to the unreliable sources - if it can be confirmed that the pages in Williams also cited for those paragraphs support all that text, then the citations can just be removed. I don't own a copy of the Williams biography but I think I ought to be able to pick up a copy from a library later this week. Hog Farm Talk 23:52, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- I have the Williams biography and should be able to discover whether it includes the uncited material. That's not to say that any additional look would not be helpful - if not much time or trouble needs to be taken to do it. Donner60 (talk) 05:58, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- I got a 1955 copy of the Williams biography from the regional university library; the pagination is consistently different by 13 pages so the original author must have been using another edition. The content added from the non-RS source appears to have been added by Aearthrise, who was blocked from the articlespace in 2024 for disruption related to ethnic groups. I have removed what could not be found in Williams. This has resulted in removal of the blockquote and there is less content on this - the previously-existing text had some selective focus, as it did not mention the utter failure of the movement. Hog Farm Talk 01:30, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 and Donner60: - I think the whole Views of Race section needs to be closely looked over. I will go ahead and ping Aearthrise to this discussion (previous mention was link but no ping) as I am quite concerned about this content. this edit by that user does not appear to have been accurate, as Infrogmation has pointed out, as noted at Talk:P. G. T. Beauregard#Streetcars, cable cars, and trams. The dubious content about execution was added here by the same user. There are other such things. For instance In the years following the beginning of Reconstruction, Beauregard's opinions changed. Unlike other ex-Confederates, his economic situation improved, and his native home of Louisiana seemed soon to be redeemed from the Reconstruction Period. Beauregard played a prominent vocal role in Louisiana during Reconstruction, and he began writing many letters, gave interviews, and made speeches about almost every issue of that time is cited to Williams p. 266. Comparing the copy I have, stuff lines up to what is on p. 266 except for there's no clear statement about his views changing. There is reference to a public letter in which Beauregard proposed accepting some of the outcomes of the war such as black suffrage, but then p. 267 calls this "completely pragmatic". So I think we'd want a clearer source to make this statement than what is available there. I really think that this section, which was added post-GA promotion, was added largely to promote certain POVs. I think it is worthwhile to note that the user who added that material has since been blocked from the articlespace for pushing POVs and being disruptive regarding ethnic groups, particularly Creole groups, of which Beauregard was a member. Hog Farm Talk 03:20, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks for picking up the Williams book and noting the extent to which it supported the text. I am glad you highlighted the dubious information and found out more about its placement in the article. I think my approach probably would have just been to see whether or not the wording of the later sections could have been verified from Williams without realizing the background. Donner60 (talk) 07:49, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 and Donner60: - I think the whole Views of Race section needs to be closely looked over. I will go ahead and ping Aearthrise to this discussion (previous mention was link but no ping) as I am quite concerned about this content. this edit by that user does not appear to have been accurate, as Infrogmation has pointed out, as noted at Talk:P. G. T. Beauregard#Streetcars, cable cars, and trams. The dubious content about execution was added here by the same user. There are other such things. For instance In the years following the beginning of Reconstruction, Beauregard's opinions changed. Unlike other ex-Confederates, his economic situation improved, and his native home of Louisiana seemed soon to be redeemed from the Reconstruction Period. Beauregard played a prominent vocal role in Louisiana during Reconstruction, and he began writing many letters, gave interviews, and made speeches about almost every issue of that time is cited to Williams p. 266. Comparing the copy I have, stuff lines up to what is on p. 266 except for there's no clear statement about his views changing. There is reference to a public letter in which Beauregard proposed accepting some of the outcomes of the war such as black suffrage, but then p. 267 calls this "completely pragmatic". So I think we'd want a clearer source to make this statement than what is available there. I really think that this section, which was added post-GA promotion, was added largely to promote certain POVs. I think it is worthwhile to note that the user who added that material has since been blocked from the articlespace for pushing POVs and being disruptive regarding ethnic groups, particularly Creole groups, of which Beauregard was a member. Hog Farm Talk 03:20, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
- I got a 1955 copy of the Williams biography from the regional university library; the pagination is consistently different by 13 pages so the original author must have been using another edition. The content added from the non-RS source appears to have been added by Aearthrise, who was blocked from the articlespace in 2024 for disruption related to ethnic groups. I have removed what could not be found in Williams. This has resulted in removal of the blockquote and there is less content on this - the previously-existing text had some selective focus, as it did not mention the utter failure of the movement. Hog Farm Talk 01:30, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
- I have the Williams biography and should be able to discover whether it includes the uncited material. That's not to say that any additional look would not be helpful - if not much time or trouble needs to be taken to do it. Donner60 (talk) 05:58, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- As to the unreliable sources - if it can be confirmed that the pages in Williams also cited for those paragraphs support all that text, then the citations can just be removed. I don't own a copy of the Williams biography but I think I ought to be able to pick up a copy from a library later this week. Hog Farm Talk 23:52, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 and Hog Farm: I am still interested in fixing this article. I had to do considerable work in the past few weeks on a rather lengthy presentation about the end of World War II. It was for the 80th anniversary of Japan's formal surrender and I had some interesting items to show as well. I also had to be prepared for questions. I have had a few coordinator tasks and some real life to attend to as well. This week I should have time to see if I can add the needed citations. In fact, I had it up on my screen to refresh my memory on what is needed when I saw your message. I think that there is not much more needed other than citations and a little editing or deleting in later sections. I agree that it is best to remove the block quote. I do want to finish this as quickly as possible so I can work on the Siege of Yorktown article, which I believe is of top importance. It came up later than this one so I had placed in second in line for my attention. Donner60 (talk) 23:01, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Hog Farm: I'd remove it. It's not immediately evident why it is there, so it is better to remove as this is not wikiquote. Z1720 (talk) 21:41, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- I think this is still fixable. The main uncited content left is in the section about post-war political views; the sentence about him risking execution is dubious and I have removed it, along with a trivial unsourced statement about a movie from the legacy section. The other uncited text in that section is largely generic stuff about Reconstruction in Louisiana that shouldn't be overly hard to cite . I've made a gloss of what SCV camps are and have removed the further explanation tag. One source which is used three times is self-published and I have tagged it as so - of the uses two are also matched with citations to Williams and the other is the English translation of the poem. Donner or Z1720 - are there any objections to removing the long block quote poem? I'm not sure if quoting at that length is really warranted. Hog Farm Talk 21:16, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Donner60 and Hog Farm: Are you still interested in fixing up this article? It seems like edits have stalled. Z1720 (talk) 14:12, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- Donner, please let me know if there's something you're struggling to source. I don't have a whole lot of time for a sustained project right now, but I do have the ability to make a library run now and then. Hog Farm Talk 02:19, 15 August 2025 (UTC)
- My thoughts on this are to take the Views on Race section, summarize down what can be supported in Williams or other RS, and then place a reasonably trimmed version of that content into the existing Post-bellum career section while dividing that other section into subsections. For instance, the Louisiana Unification section is already covered in a lesser degree of detail in the Post-bellum career section; verifiable material can be used to beef up the post-bellum coverage some. I'm not convinced that the current amount of detail regarding the Waukesha meeting, the Lincoln quote, or some of the other stuff. But I'm hesistant to conduct such a major rearranging and trimming without a consensus here to point to. Hog Farm Talk 15:36, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
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The "Evolution of criteria" and "Revocation" sections have long bullet point paragraphs that is difficult to read, especially on mobile. These should be broken up with headings, summarised and trimmed of excess detail, and split into paragraphs. There is an "outdated" orange banner at the top of the "Legal protection" section. There are external links in the "Authority and privileges". Instead, this section should use prose to describe the information. There is some uncited text in the article. Z1720 (talk) 04:15, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
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The history section is quite large. I recommed that level 3 headings be used to break up the text and the later paragraphs be merged together. There is an orange "update needed" banner at the top of "Wigan Warriors R.L.F.C.". There is uncited text, including entire paragraphs. The "Surroundings" section is something I have never seen before in an article, and perhaps should be removed. I also think the "Robin Park Arena" is offtopic and potentially a WP:COATRACK. Z1720 (talk) 04:42, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- Delist No significant edits to address concerns since this was opened. Z1720 (talk) 14:04, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Lots of short, one-sentence paragraphs added after its GAN promotion that need to be formatted more effectively. Extensive use of block quotes which do not adhere to a summary style and might have copyright concerns. Z1720 (talk) 04:03, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720: I haven't really been involved in this too much since the GAN, but I'm willing to take a look and see if there's anything I can do to help. Viriditas (talk) 21:08, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720: Making my way through 16 years of revisions isn't an easy task. Do you know if there's a way to use a WikiBlame-like tool that only shows me major deletions and additions? That's all I need to see really. Viriditas (talk) 21:42, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: I'm not aware of any such tool, other than comparing diffs. Z1720 (talk) 21:50, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- Oh, I just realized. The page statistics page basically does this in a compact form. I will start there. Viriditas (talk) 21:54, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- BTW, the page statistics tool does all of this and more. Very handy. Viriditas (talk) 22:19, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- Oh, I just realized. The page statistics page basically does this in a compact form. I will start there. Viriditas (talk) 21:54, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: I'm not aware of any such tool, other than comparing diffs. Z1720 (talk) 21:50, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- Template:Dunham family tree was deleted from the article in 2017. Do you have any objection to restoring it? Viriditas (talk) 22:33, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- I'm not a fan of family trees, but I don't think there's anything against having them in Wikipedia MOS. Z1720 (talk) 23:23, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- Just throwing that out there. I've been making copyedits. Viriditas (talk) 23:38, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- I'm not a fan of family trees, but I don't think there's anything against having them in Wikipedia MOS. Z1720 (talk) 23:23, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720: I'm looking through the article now and I see there are some minor issues with what newer sources have reported. I also don't like how the family life section is given precedence over her other achievements. If this was an article about a single father pursuing a career you can guarantee that the article wouldn't be structured this way. Viriditas (talk) 22:27, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: Is there information from sources about her other accomplishments that can be added? I am fine with de-emphasizing her family life in favour of giving more information to her accomplishments. I suspect this happened because she is Obama's mother, so many sources give information in relation to him. Z1720 (talk) 22:55, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- My overarching point is that the article needs a renewed effort at clarification and verification. I was browsing through Scott 2011, which I don't believe is used as a source since it was published years after the GAN. There's been a lot of new information and analysis since that time. For example, the opening line in the early life section says the subject was born at St. Francis Hospital, but this may not be true. It also doesn't mention anything about the Unitarian church they attended in Seattle. Lots of missing details like that. Further, the early life section skips over most of her formative years, which is detailed by Scott 2011. It then segues right into family life and marriages even though Scott 2011 makes it clear that this is not what Ann wanted or wanted to be define by, but I admit it is difficult to structure this otherwise. All I'm saying is that this GAR will need some extra time. My biggest concern is making sure there are no errors. Viriditas (talk) 23:05, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: Thanks for the update and the clarification. If editors are willing to work on the article, this GAR will remain open. I went through the "Family life" section and removed off-topic or TMI information. Feel free to revert anything you felt should not have been removed. I fully support expanding the article, and feel free to ping me with questions or if this is ready for a re-review. Z1720 (talk) 23:07, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- Well, I just dived in. I had no idea this article had degraded to such an extent. Dunham's thesis is cited in four different types of citations and dozens of times from those four. It's like whoever was editing just didn't care and did whatever. This is going to take weeks to fix. Viriditas (talk) 02:09, 12 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: Are you still interested in working on this article? Z1720 (talk) 14:03, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720: I made 60 edits to address the problems. If you think more are needed, let me know where. Viriditas (talk) 20:34, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: Ref 60 ("Gandhi, Vikram (December 16, 2016),") Should be replaced as it is an IMDB source. Upon a skim I don't see anything else that needs to be addressed. After this is resolved, is this article ready for a full review? Z1720 (talk) 20:44, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- Probably not. You should just go ahead and fail it if you think it doesn't meet the criteria. It's been ten years and too many editors, and there's no way I can vouch for the article in its current state. Viriditas (talk) 20:59, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- Probably not. You should just go ahead and fail it if you think it doesn't meet the criteria. It's been ten years and too many editors, and there's no way I can vouch for the article in its current state. Viriditas (talk) 20:59, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: Ref 60 ("Gandhi, Vikram (December 16, 2016),") Should be replaced as it is an IMDB source. Upon a skim I don't see anything else that needs to be addressed. After this is resolved, is this article ready for a full review? Z1720 (talk) 20:44, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720: I made 60 edits to address the problems. If you think more are needed, let me know where. Viriditas (talk) 20:34, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: Are you still interested in working on this article? Z1720 (talk) 14:03, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- Well, I just dived in. I had no idea this article had degraded to such an extent. Dunham's thesis is cited in four different types of citations and dozens of times from those four. It's like whoever was editing just didn't care and did whatever. This is going to take weeks to fix. Viriditas (talk) 02:09, 12 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: Thanks for the update and the clarification. If editors are willing to work on the article, this GAR will remain open. I went through the "Family life" section and removed off-topic or TMI information. Feel free to revert anything you felt should not have been removed. I fully support expanding the article, and feel free to ping me with questions or if this is ready for a re-review. Z1720 (talk) 23:07, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- My overarching point is that the article needs a renewed effort at clarification and verification. I was browsing through Scott 2011, which I don't believe is used as a source since it was published years after the GAN. There's been a lot of new information and analysis since that time. For example, the opening line in the early life section says the subject was born at St. Francis Hospital, but this may not be true. It also doesn't mention anything about the Unitarian church they attended in Seattle. Lots of missing details like that. Further, the early life section skips over most of her formative years, which is detailed by Scott 2011. It then segues right into family life and marriages even though Scott 2011 makes it clear that this is not what Ann wanted or wanted to be define by, but I admit it is difficult to structure this otherwise. All I'm saying is that this GAR will need some extra time. My biggest concern is making sure there are no errors. Viriditas (talk) 23:05, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Viriditas: Is there information from sources about her other accomplishments that can be added? I am fine with de-emphasizing her family life in favour of giving more information to her accomplishments. I suspect this happened because she is Obama's mother, so many sources give information in relation to him. Z1720 (talk) 22:55, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Unreliable sources like YouTube, IMDB, vimeo and Panarmenian.net are used. Z1720 (talk) 03:58, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- Just curious as to why Panarmenian.net is unreliable. It's a quite well-established Armenian news agency. ----Երևանցի talk 08:39, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Yerevantsi: This determination is based on consensus at WP:RSN, including the latest one at Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard/Archive 445#panarmenian.net. Z1720 (talk) 15:33, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- That seems to focus largely on the article (which does appear problematic), not its reliability per se. A simple Google Books search indicates that it is widely cited in scholarly works. ----Երևանցի talk 11:10, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Yerevantsi: This determination is based on consensus at WP:RSN, including the latest one at Wikipedia:Reliable sources/Noticeboard/Archive 445#panarmenian.net. Z1720 (talk) 15:33, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- Just curious as to why Panarmenian.net is unreliable. It's a quite well-established Armenian news agency. ----Երևանցի talk 08:39, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- Panarmenian aside, I've already removed some of the uncited sentences and paragraphs and will work on the rest in coming days. ----Երևանցի talk 11:10, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- Yerevantsi, do you feel that the article has been brought up to GA status, or would you like more time to work on it? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:45, 11 September 2025 (UTC)
- I think much of the uncited material has been removed by now, but not all. I'll take another look and work on the rest. ----Երևանցի talk 18:52, 11 September 2025 (UTC)
- All done on my side.----Երևանցի talk 12:10, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- All done on my side.----Երևանցի talk 12:10, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- I think much of the uncited material has been removed by now, but not all. I'll take another look and work on the rest. ----Երևանցի talk 18:52, 11 September 2025 (UTC)
- Yerevantsi, do you feel that the article has been brought up to GA status, or would you like more time to work on it? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:45, 11 September 2025 (UTC)
- Panarmenian aside, I've already removed some of the uncited sentences and paragraphs and will work on the rest in coming days. ----Երևանցի talk 11:10, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. Z1720 (talk) 03:53, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- Which paragraphs did you have in mind? The introduction summary doesn't need citations (unless to support something like a quote) and the two uncited paragraphs towards the end of the article were uncited in 2008 when the last GA decision took place. Sionk (talk) 14:34, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720; @Sionk - some reorganising done, refs checked (some needed moving or updating) and some added. A little more to do, but getting there, I think. Tony Holkham (Talk) 15:51, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- I added cn tags to the article, although it looks like most of the uncited statements have been resolved. @Sionk: The GA criteria has been updated since this article was promoted; one such change is that all statements (except usual exceptions like the lead, plot summaries, and WP:CALC) need to be cited. Z1720 (talk) 15:58, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- I think everything is cited now, and some more fixing, copy editing and tweaking done. Happy to do more if any suggestions for further improvement are forthcoming. Tony Holkham (Talk) 22:38, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720; @Sionk - some reorganising done, refs checked (some needed moving or updating) and some added. A little more to do, but getting there, I think. Tony Holkham (Talk) 15:51, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- I took another look at the article, and see that the "History" section stops at 1941. Surely there must be some events of note to mention in the article from the last 80 years. At the very least the island's contribution to major historical events, like WWII, Welsh devolution and their voting history, economic impact post-WWII, Brexit, and COVID-19 can be mentioned. "Governance" section suffers from MOS:OVERSECTION. Z1720 (talk) 15:48, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
- Z1720, the island has a population of 1. Apart from WWII, which is discussed in the "Radar station" subsection, what precisely do you anticipate for the island's contribution to Welsh devolution, voting history, economic impact, Brexit, and COVID-19? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:30, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: Somet things that could be included: Opinions and political changes due to Welsh devolution, voting patterns for Brexit, how the economic situation of Wales has affected (or not affected) this region, how COVID-19 affected the economic and political conditions, the resident's health outcomes, and how travel was or was not restricted to the island. While sources might not have talked about all of these issues in great length, having no historical events mentioned on the island post-WWII is a very large gap, and a search might find other events that could also be added to the article. Z1720 (talk) 23:22, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
- Z1720, to repeat: the island has a population of 1 (one). With that in mind, can I ask you to produce sources on Brexit voting patterns or details of resident's health? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 23:39, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: Somet things that could be included: Opinions and political changes due to Welsh devolution, voting patterns for Brexit, how the economic situation of Wales has affected (or not affected) this region, how COVID-19 affected the economic and political conditions, the resident's health outcomes, and how travel was or was not restricted to the island. While sources might not have talked about all of these issues in great length, having no historical events mentioned on the island post-WWII is a very large gap, and a search might find other events that could also be added to the article. Z1720 (talk) 23:22, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
@AirshipJungleman29: Sorry about that: I was going quickly and, reading the information about the various buildings, assumed that there was a more steady population on the island. I think I was also further mistaken because "History" section talks about a preacher administering to residents on the island, but there is no mention of a mass exodus or population decline in the article. I'm looking for additional sources to see if there's an explanation for this. In the meantime, additional sources that could be used in the article are as follows:
- Population size, ecology and movements of gulls breeding on Flat Holm Island
- The use of mowing and herbicides for vegetation management on the Island of Flat Holm
- A 2019 event where three people accidently came to the island (multiple news stories about this event).
- Impact of cyber-invasive species on a large ecological network: gives extensive detail on the ecosystem of the island
If consensus is that no other information needs to be added, I'm fine with this being closed. However, I think the post-1940s gap can still be filled with information on why there is only one person on the island right now. Z1720 (talk) 00:10, 11 September 2025 (UTC)
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GA from 2016. Multiple uncited sections and general article structuring issues. Onegreatjoke (talk) 02:01, 2 August 2025 (UTC)
- I might try to work on it. Probably beyond anything I can do. 🐔 Chicdat Bawk to me! 13:25, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Chicdat: There are still uncited statements in the article, and your last edit was Sept 1. Are you or other editors reading this still interested in addressing concerns? Z1720 (talk) 14:01, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- Pinging MSLQr who is certainly far more of an expert in this area than I and who has been doing some work on it. 🐔 Chicdat Bawk to me! 14:08, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- Pinging MSLQr who is certainly far more of an expert in this area than I and who has been doing some work on it. 🐔 Chicdat Bawk to me! 14:08, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Chicdat: There are still uncited statements in the article, and your last edit was Sept 1. Are you or other editors reading this still interested in addressing concerns? Z1720 (talk) 14:01, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
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I was going through the remaining entries at WP:SWEEPS2023, had some concerns regarding the quality of this article, and found that Z1720 had already posted a notice about two weeks ago. There is substantial uncited content in this article - while some of this is plot information that can be assumed to be sourced to the movies, much is not. Additionally, there are rather poor sources which are being used, such as IMDB and various blogs/pseudonymous sources such as Comic Book Movie or Video Junkie. Hog Farm Talk 01:25, 30 July 2025 (UTC)
@Hog Farm:, taking a shot. Right now I'm collating book sources to verify the early history. Bear with me as I'm busy in my life off Wikipedia, but I'm confident I can improve the article enough to satisfy the GA criteria. DAP 💅 20:06, 11 August 2025
- @Hog Farm:, largely finished save for a final touch up of the prose and inline citations. Please let me know what you think. DAP 💅 15:74, 12 September 2025 (UTC)
- I'm not the nominator, but I think you caught all the uncited instances and added necessary refs. However, some of the shortened cites are broken (e.g., there are two Shirrel-related sources published in 2008, so "Shirrel 2008" is confused; "Dunkin & Smith 2013" doesn't seem to point to a source). —LastJabberwocky (Rrarr) 19:29, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
- Whoops, didn't even see that. Should be fixed now. DAP 💅 15:00, 17 September 2025 (UTC)
- Should the Personnel section be sourced? Is this even standard in such articles? My first thought was that this could be assumed to be sourced to the movie credits, but there's a bunch of uncredited roles here. These whole tables feel like a potential original research trap. Hog Farm Talk 01:57, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
- This structure is indeed conventional for such articles (ie Captain America in film, a fairly recent good article I looked to as a template, and a featured article in Planet of the Apes). With that being said, I don't feel strongly about preserving the status quo and am amenable to any changes suggested if they aren't satisfactory. DAP 💅 04:04, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
- I think this can be kept Hog Farm Talk 15:40, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
- I think this can be kept Hog Farm Talk 15:40, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
- This structure is indeed conventional for such articles (ie Captain America in film, a fairly recent good article I looked to as a template, and a featured article in Planet of the Apes). With that being said, I don't feel strongly about preserving the status quo and am amenable to any changes suggested if they aren't satisfactory. DAP 💅 04:04, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
- Should the Personnel section be sourced? Is this even standard in such articles? My first thought was that this could be assumed to be sourced to the movie credits, but there's a bunch of uncredited roles here. These whole tables feel like a potential original research trap. Hog Farm Talk 01:57, 20 September 2025 (UTC)
- Whoops, didn't even see that. Should be fixed now. DAP 💅 15:00, 17 September 2025 (UTC)
- I'm not the nominator, but I think you caught all the uncited instances and added necessary refs. However, some of the shortened cites are broken (e.g., there are two Shirrel-related sources published in 2008, so "Shirrel 2008" is confused; "Dunkin & Smith 2013" doesn't seem to point to a source). —LastJabberwocky (Rrarr) 19:29, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
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There is lots of uncited text in the article, including entire paragraphs. At over 12,000 words, this article is too detailed and WP:TOOBIG. I suggest that information be spun out, summarised more effectively, or removed. Z1720 (talk) 20:11, 16 July 2025 (UTC)
- "Curator" of the article here. Won't argue any of that in the slightest. It's been a decade and a lots of material has been added since. I did originally mean to spin off the History section into its own article but never got around to it. Would that be a good first step? As for detail, any particular sections that should be trimmed? Mac Dreamstate (talk) 17:51, 17 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Mac Dreamstate: Spinning out the "History" section might be good if the article on its own would be notable (I suspect that it is). I usually prefer subject-interested editors to review the article's prose first because they often have a better sense of what is the most important information. However, I think spinning out/reducing the amount of text in the History section will probably solve most of the too-detailed concerns. Z1720 (talk) 19:53, 17 July 2025 (UTC)
- Cool. I'll get to work on that. Also, could you point to the paragraphs of uncited text—those should be easy to fix. Mac Dreamstate (talk) 19:56, 18 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Mac Dreamstate: I have added citation needed templates to the article. Z1720 (talk) 20:27, 18 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Mac Dreamstate: Maybe it should be considered to move some of the content from the "Rules and technique" and "Scoring and judging" sections to the Ski jumping article? Since most of it applies to both ski jumping and ski flying, and the coverage on these topics in the other article is less detailed. Rewording the Ski flying article in such a way that the common regulations are only roughly outlined and the focus is given to the key differences. Maybe it would prove to be more friendlier than laying out every detail of the combined regulations in a unified fashion? Dżamper (talk) 11:55, 3 August 2025 (UTC)
- That could work as well. At the time of writing, I was more enthusiastic about fleshing out the ski flying article to notice that the ski jumping article was sparse in comparison, and written—in part—by non-English speakers. What I'll focus on first is addressing all the cite tags, then creating the History article, and finally seeing what I can do about transplanting some of the Rules and techniques content to the ski jumping article. I will say, however, that a lot of the techniques described are specific to ski flying, so it's not a simple copy-and-paste job. Mac Dreamstate (talk) 14:41, 3 August 2025 (UTC)
- Another suggestion, having dealt with a decent amount of cite tags: rather than create a separate history article, would it be sufficient for bringing the page size down if the content from the abovementioned Rules and techniques section (as well as Scoring and judging) were instead incorporated into the ski jumping article? I'd much rather summarise the latter than write up new truncated prose for the current History section. Mac Dreamstate (talk) 22:34, 5 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Mac Dreamstate: Yes, information can be moved to ski jumping if it is appropriate to do so, as that article is not very large right now. Z1720 (talk) 23:24, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
- OK, I'll continue on that. I certainly haven't been trying to stall to game the system or anything like that. It's just been a busy few months, and it is a lot of content to sift through. I've also significantly cut down my activity on WP this year. A smidge more time would be appreciated before a de-listing occurs. Mac Dreamstate (talk) 17:09, 11 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Mac Dreamstate: I struck out my delist below. I do not think you were gaming the system, just wanted to provide an update an update (and sometimes a declaration encourages editors to address concerns). If you have a question for me, or this is ready for a re-review, please WP:PING me as I sometimes miss updates on my watchlist. Z1720 (talk) 13:59, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- Another suggestion, having dealt with a decent amount of cite tags: rather than create a separate history article, would it be sufficient for bringing the page size down if the content from the abovementioned Rules and techniques section (as well as Scoring and judging) were instead incorporated into the ski jumping article? I'd much rather summarise the latter than write up new truncated prose for the current History section. Mac Dreamstate (talk) 22:34, 5 August 2025 (UTC)
- That could work as well. At the time of writing, I was more enthusiastic about fleshing out the ski flying article to notice that the ski jumping article was sparse in comparison, and written—in part—by non-English speakers. What I'll focus on first is addressing all the cite tags, then creating the History article, and finally seeing what I can do about transplanting some of the Rules and techniques content to the ski jumping article. I will say, however, that a lot of the techniques described are specific to ski flying, so it's not a simple copy-and-paste job. Mac Dreamstate (talk) 14:41, 3 August 2025 (UTC)
DelistWork seems to have stalled and citation concerns remain. Z1720 (talk) 15:38, 26 August 2025 (UTC)- Z1720, I think Mac Dreamstate would appreciate clarification regarding their question above. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:58, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
- Z1720, I think Mac Dreamstate would appreciate clarification regarding their question above. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:58, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
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In December 2024, an IP introduced an uncited "Society" section to the article. This contributed to the article's bloated 12,000+ word count. There is also other uncited text, especially in the "Administrative divisions" section. Z1720 (talk) 18:35, 16 July 2025 (UTC)
- I removed the Society section and
am planning to rewriterewrote the Administrative divisions section based on the zhwiki article section (which seems to be pretty well referenced). Could you perhaps highlight if there are any other places that need citations? S5A-0043🚎(Talk) 09:07, 17 July 2025 (UTC) - Right...I cleaned up some of the uncited sentences at the end of last month but admittedly I entirely forgot about this later on. @Z1720: could you perhaps look over the article and see if there are any other places that need missing citations? S5A-0043🚎(Talk) 11:40, 21 August 2025 (UTC)
- @S5A-0043: I have added a couple citation needed tags. Z1720 (talk) 22:25, 24 August 2025 (UTC)
- All three {{cn}} tags have been resolved. S5A-0043🚎(Talk) 11:51, 25 August 2025 (UTC)
- @S5A-0043: Citation concerns resolved. The article is still over 11,000 words. I recommend that some sections be trimmed of too much detail. Some recommendations to see what can be trimmed and/or moved to other articles include the following sections: "People's Republic era", "Cityscape", "Religion", "Education and research", "Public" (under "Transportation"), "Cuisine" (I think most of the food descriptions listed can be moved to daughter articles), "Sports", and "Parks and resorts" (which has too many one-sentence paragraphs). Z1720 (talk) 15:26, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
- Ok, thanks for the recommendations. I’ll probably take a look over the weekend. S5A-0043🚎(Talk) 03:35, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 I managed to cut it down to 10096 words. Do you think this is enough to address the length concerns? I'm afraid I'm at a bottleneck on what to trim and with limited time to edit in the next few weeks I can't carry on cutting this for long. S5A-0043🚎(Talk) 06:35, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 I managed to cut it down to 10096 words. Do you think this is enough to address the length concerns? I'm afraid I'm at a bottleneck on what to trim and with limited time to edit in the next few weeks I can't carry on cutting this for long. S5A-0043🚎(Talk) 06:35, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
- Ok, thanks for the recommendations. I’ll probably take a look over the weekend. S5A-0043🚎(Talk) 03:35, 27 August 2025 (UTC)
- @S5A-0043: Citation concerns resolved. The article is still over 11,000 words. I recommend that some sections be trimmed of too much detail. Some recommendations to see what can be trimmed and/or moved to other articles include the following sections: "People's Republic era", "Cityscape", "Religion", "Education and research", "Public" (under "Transportation"), "Cuisine" (I think most of the food descriptions listed can be moved to daughter articles), "Sports", and "Parks and resorts" (which has too many one-sentence paragraphs). Z1720 (talk) 15:26, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
- All three {{cn}} tags have been resolved. S5A-0043🚎(Talk) 11:51, 25 August 2025 (UTC)
- @S5A-0043: I have added a couple citation needed tags. Z1720 (talk) 22:25, 24 August 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements in the article, including entire paragraphs. At over 14,000 words, the article is too detailed and WP:TOOBIG. Some prose should be spun out, summarised more effectively, or removed as too detailed. Many sources listed in "Bibliography" are not used as inline citations and should be moved to "Further reading". Z1720 (talk) 16:00, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
- First, this article has already been reduced in size, to allign with the Presidency of Dwight D. Eisenhower article. Grant's presidency was detailed, as it included 8 years of turbulent Reconstruction, Native American, Domestic, and Foreign Policy. Second, Grant's presidency article, should not be a reduced format historical article format, when the Eisenhower article receives ample article size. This is Wikipedia. Articles should be detailed, supplied by reliable sources. Important issues such a civil rights, prosecution of the Klu Klux Klan, should have detail. Both Grant and Eisenhower, deserve equal importance and equal size. As far as sources, not used in the article, I have no issue with them being removed. Third, I think this article has already been improved, and deserves GA standing. I am not sure why Grant is getting this attention all of a sudden. The article appears to be written in a neutral format. Why now? Cmguy777 (talk) 16:48, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: Wikipedia is a general knowledge encyclopedia, and not all details will be included in an article. If the level of detail is important, the information can be spun out into a child-article. WP:DETAIL outlines examples of how much detail an article should have, and states that "Some readers need a lot of details on one or more aspects of the topic (links to full-sized separate subarticles)." The last part, linking to separate articles, might be what is best for some aspects of this article. WP:TOOBIG outlines that articles should probably be less than 9,000 words: at 14,000, this article far exceeds that. In a GAR, the current article version is evaluated on its adherence to the GA criteria and does not consider how much work has been done to an article, or how much it has been improved. The Eisenhower article is not a GA, so it is hard to compare the qualities (and size) of those two articles for this GAR. Z1720 (talk) 17:29, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
- Of course, articles can be spun out. You have not mentioned anything specifically you want changed. What is it exactly you want changed? Again, I have substantially reduced this article before. Is there an exact rule of how long articles should be such as 9,000 words or less. What does "should probably be less" mean ? Anymore reduction in this article would reduce the reliability and needed context of the article, imo. Grant has a lot of biographers and biographies. Renewed interest has been taken in Grant's life, generalship, and presidency. Charles W. Calhouns (2017) book on Grant's presidency has 593 pages. What specific areas of the article do you find too long? Cmguy777 (talk) 19:32, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: Wikipedia is a general knowledge encyclopedia, and not all details will be included in an article. If the level of detail is important, the information can be spun out into a child-article. WP:DETAIL outlines examples of how much detail an article should have, and states that "Some readers need a lot of details on one or more aspects of the topic (links to full-sized separate subarticles)." The last part, linking to separate articles, might be what is best for some aspects of this article. WP:TOOBIG outlines that articles should probably be less than 9,000 words: at 14,000, this article far exceeds that. In a GAR, the current article version is evaluated on its adherence to the GA criteria and does not consider how much work has been done to an article, or how much it has been improved. The Eisenhower article is not a GA, so it is hard to compare the qualities (and size) of those two articles for this GAR. Z1720 (talk) 17:29, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
Many notable people and topics have books that are hundreds or thousands of pages long. WP:TOOBIG has useful rules of thumb for article size. I usually do not recommend specifics at the beginning because I want to give a chance for subject-matter experts to make recommendations first. Since I have been asked, here are some suggestions:
- In general, I recommend that a subject-matter expert do a copy edit of the entire article and remove redundant text, off-topic information about others, and sumarise text more effectively when possible.
- First Presidency:
- "Financial policy" Suffers from MOS:OVERSECTION. I suggest these paragraphs be merged and extra/too detailed information be placed in the appropriate article.
- "Failed annexation of Santo Domingo (Dominican Republic)" could be too detailed and possibly trimmed.
- "Native American policy" also suffers from MOS:OVERSECTION and, if the paragraphs are merged together, information can be spun out to the appropriate articles.
- "Domestic policy" also suffers from OVERSECTION and not as much detail is needed for all of these individual aspects (especially the "Holidays law")
- Second Presidency:
- "Vicksburg riots" and "South Carolina 1876" spend at least a paragraph explaining the conflict before mentioning Grant. While a brief introduction is appropriate, too much space is given to this off-topic information and this article should focus on Grant's actions and policies.
- "Foreign policy" suffers from OVERSECTION with the last three paragraphs: these should be merged and summarised.
- "Reforms and scandals" Lots of oversection, it is better to merge the information and give a wikilink than have a whole paragraph explaining each topic.
- "States admitted to the Union", "Vetoes" and "Government agencies instituted" can be moved to the part of the article most appropriate to his presidency. "Memorials and monuments" can be moved to Grant's main article.
This is not an exhaustive list, and there can of course be disagreement. None of this negates the uncited paragraphs in the article, which also need to be resolved. Z1720 (talk) 20:05, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
- Many of those spin off articles have not been created. The Presidency of Barack Obama article 13,915 words. I found that on XTools. Is this correct? You can verify that. The Holidays Laws is important. They are national holidays created by Grant and congress. This article can be improved. You are free to make edits to the article. Cmguy777 (talk) 20:22, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: Yes, Presidency of Barack Obama is 13,000 long. No, it is also not a GA. This process is to evaluate an article against the GA criteria. If the article topic is notable, any editor can make a new article and place information there. I will not be making edits to this article as I am busy with many on-and-off wiki tasks. I am happy to support those who do want to make those edits and will re-review if pinged. Z1720 (talk) 20:34, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
- This article passed GA in the past. Yes. There is room for improvement, and thanks for the specifics. I just don't think it necessary to take away the GA status, when in the past it was given GA status, by whatever standard(s) was(were used) at the time. Improvements can be made to the article without removing the GA, imo. I have made past reductions to the article, found in the talk page, to improve the article. Grant's Native American policy, reforms and scandals, have been made into spinoff articles. Probably, the next spin off article should be Grant's Foreign policy. Grant's presidency was different. He was elected and served two consecutive terms in office, that would not be repeated until the election of Woodrow Wilson. Thank you. Cmguy777 (talk) 21:25, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: An article will not be delisted if improvements are ongoing and concerns addressed. My concerns are listed above. The GAR will assess the article against the current criteria, not the criteria that was in place when it was passed. Z1720 (talk) 21:49, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
- This article has been significantly been reduced in size, before. Your concerns are noted. What about editor concensus? These objections seem to be only your objections focused specifically on Grant, not other Presidents. You also seem to be requiring other spin off articles to be made on Grant's domestic and financial policies. The Santo Domingo annexation was very important to Grant. It was also a drama between Grant and Charles Sumner, who would control the Republican Party. Some leeway should be allowed in that section on article length, since this article focuses on Grant's Presidency. When you say "delisted", are you saying removal of the article from Wikipedia? Cmguy777 (talk) 15:49, 10 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: When I say "delisted", I am saying that the article will no longer be designated as a "good article". It will still be a Wikipedia article regardless of whether it is delisted or not. Z1720 (talk) 15:52, 10 July 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you. I can work on the annexation of Santo Domingo (Dominican Republic) section. That was a primary initiative to the Grant Administration. Cmguy777 (talk) 16:34, 10 July 2025 (UTC)
- I reworked first term foreign policy introduction and the the Santo Domingo section. Does that look alright? Thank you. Cmguy777 (talk) 19:16, 22 July 2025 (UTC)
- I have not had any reply yet. Please reply. Thanks. Cmguy777 (talk) 05:00, 28 July 2025 (UTC)
- Cmguy777, you may find it better in the future to WP:PING Z1720, as I have now done. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:21, 7 August 2025 (UTC)
- I have not had any reply yet. Please reply. Thanks. Cmguy777 (talk) 05:00, 28 July 2025 (UTC)
- I reworked first term foreign policy introduction and the the Santo Domingo section. Does that look alright? Thank you. Cmguy777 (talk) 19:16, 22 July 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you. I can work on the annexation of Santo Domingo (Dominican Republic) section. That was a primary initiative to the Grant Administration. Cmguy777 (talk) 16:34, 10 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: When I say "delisted", I am saying that the article will no longer be designated as a "good article". It will still be a Wikipedia article regardless of whether it is delisted or not. Z1720 (talk) 15:52, 10 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: An article will not be delisted if improvements are ongoing and concerns addressed. My concerns are listed above. The GAR will assess the article against the current criteria, not the criteria that was in place when it was passed. Z1720 (talk) 21:49, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: Yes, Presidency of Barack Obama is 13,000 long. No, it is also not a GA. This process is to evaluate an article against the GA criteria. If the article topic is notable, any editor can make a new article and place information there. I will not be making edits to this article as I am busy with many on-and-off wiki tasks. I am happy to support those who do want to make those edits and will re-review if pinged. Z1720 (talk) 20:34, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
@Cmguy777: I am sorry that I did not respond sooner. AJ29 is correct: pinging me is a better way to ensure that I respond. I have done a deep read of the first paragraph of "Foreign policy" and the "Attempted annexation of Santo Domingo" sections. They have improved from where they were before, and the comments below are what I think need to happen next to bring them to GA quality.
- "Grant was a man of peace" I don't know what this means because I don't know much about him. I think this should be removed, and instead the paragraph can describe what this means later on.
- "Besides Grant himself, the main players in foreign affairs..." This is an instance where the article starts going off-topic. Later in the paragraph, it starts describing Fish's work. I think this parargaph should focus on what Grant did and what he did with foreign policy. If Grant was hands-off and let Fish run everything, then that should be explained. If Grant focused on specific issues, that should be explained in this paragraph. Describing the major players of Grant's administration is important, but their contributions should to be connected to Grant's presidency more explicitly.
- "He tried to annex the Caribbean country of the Dominican Republic as a safety valve for them." Safety valve feels like an idiom to me, and I don't know what that means in this context. Is Grant buying DR to bring Black people to the location? Was he trying to have DR become part of the USA? This should be explained.
- "Republican Senator Charles Sumner opposed Grant, believing he sided with men of financial interest." Why is this important to state in this article? I think it can be deleted.
- In the second paragraph, there is information about the annexation of DR. This makes the first paragraph redundant, and I think it can be removed.
- I made lots of cuts as I was reading. Feel free to take a look and reverse any changes. However, with the length of the article I think some of these changes were helpful to reduce the word count, and I would continue having cuts like this in other parts of the article.
I hope the above helps editors with ideas on how to improve other sections of the article. There are still uncited statements in other spots and I highly recommend a thorough copy-edit and trimming of off-topic information before a re-review is requested, and I think this article needs some more work before I could recommend that it keeps its GA status. Feel free to ping me with questions or comments. Z1720 (talk) 05:45, 8 August 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you for your comments. I am for reducing article narration, but not at the expense of loosing valued content. Also, I am for going by what the sources say. As far as Santo Domingo goes, Grant was the main leader behind annexation. I readded information that Grant appointed Frederick Douglas. Apparently, Grant wanted both to make Santo Domingo a state and to serve as a refuge for blacks. Douglas supported the annexation. Cmguy777 (talk) 15:54, 8 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: The content doesn't need to be lost: it can be moved to other articles whose scope is narrower. Too much prose stops readers from finding the most important information and discourages them from reading any part of the article. Prose cannot include everything that the sources say as articles are written in summary style. The information described above cannot be explained here: it needs to be explained in the article.
- Regarding Frederick Douglass: the article does not describe who he is or why he is important until "Election of 1872". If Douglass is to be included in the "Attempted annexation of Santo Domingo" section, the importance of his appointment needs to be explained there. Otherwise, it is just WP:TRIVIA: a miscellaneous fact that the reader does not need to know to understand the importance of this event in Grant's presidency. My preference is to remove this sentence, and trivia prose similar to this in other places in the article. Z1720 (talk) 20:39, 8 August 2025 (UTC)
- The importance? Frederick Douglas was a leading spokes person for black rights. Historian Jean Edward Smith, Grant, on page 505, mentioned Grant appointing Douglas secretary of the Santo Domingo commission. Do you have that book?. I do. I don't feel appreciated in this article. I should not have to defend every edit made on this article. I am only going by what Smith said. Removing important content will affect the neautrality of the article. I also feel there may be underlying hostility toward Grant, or people don't believe his presidency was that important. I just go by what the sources say. Cmguy777 (talk) 04:52, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: If Douglass is to be included in this section of the Wikipedia article, the Wikipedia article needs to explain who this person is and why he is important to mention here. In other words, if the information is important, the Wikipedia article needs to explain its importance. A reader should not have to go to the source to get that information. Z1720 (talk) 05:50, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- Here is a link that explains Douglas and Santo Domingo. His appointment by Grant represented black progress, that was part of the "new" for blacks. [11] Cmguy777 (talk) 07:21, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: The source looks good to add. The information needs to be explained and added to the Wikipedia article, not this page. Z1720 (talk) 14:48, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- It would best to add in a add in a note that Douglas was a prominent African Amercian, who was primarily known for work as an abolitionist. Cmguy777 (talk) 17:56, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: The source looks good to add. The information needs to be explained and added to the Wikipedia article, not this page. Z1720 (talk) 14:48, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- Here is a link that explains Douglas and Santo Domingo. His appointment by Grant represented black progress, that was part of the "new" for blacks. [11] Cmguy777 (talk) 07:21, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: If Douglass is to be included in this section of the Wikipedia article, the Wikipedia article needs to explain who this person is and why he is important to mention here. In other words, if the information is important, the Wikipedia article needs to explain its importance. A reader should not have to go to the source to get that information. Z1720 (talk) 05:50, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- The importance? Frederick Douglas was a leading spokes person for black rights. Historian Jean Edward Smith, Grant, on page 505, mentioned Grant appointing Douglas secretary of the Santo Domingo commission. Do you have that book?. I do. I don't feel appreciated in this article. I should not have to defend every edit made on this article. I am only going by what Smith said. Removing important content will affect the neautrality of the article. I also feel there may be underlying hostility toward Grant, or people don't believe his presidency was that important. I just go by what the sources say. Cmguy777 (talk) 04:52, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- Delist. The current format of giving every little detail its own level-4 section is definitely excessive. For one example, there are 224 words dedicated to the Civil Rights Act of 1875. Half of that paragraph has nothing to do with Grant. The parts that do pertain to Grant include a quotation that could be replaced with a concise statement, as well as a line straight up telling the reader the paragraph is not that relevant: "Grant had no role in writing the Civil Rights Act of 1875 but he did sign it a few days before the Republicans lost control of Congress." Thebiguglyalien (talk) 🛸 22:46, 8 August 2025 (UTC)
- The Civil Rights Act of 1875 was ground breaking. The first in U.S. History. And yes, Grant signed it into law. Grant was the president and deserves credit for signing the legislation into law. Cmguy777 (talk) 04:59, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- Delist This article has been open for over a month and a half, and there are still significant paragraphs without citations. The length concerns also still remain. Work seems to have stalled, and it might be better if the article is worked on without the pressure of GAR, and nominated at GAN when it is ready. Z1720 (talk) 00:58, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
- I felt I have been the only one who has working on this article. Wikipedia is suppose to be a group editor editing. It's not one editor giving orders. I don’t agree GA should be removed. I felt I have been doing allot of the editing, trying to comply with "suggested" changes. Also, no one ever told me whether my changes were good enough. I hope there is no personal bias against Grant in any delisting process. I stopped editing because there was no positive feed back on my previous edits. That is not my fault. I believe the article is a good article too. It should not be delisted. This article well referenced. There needs to be more editors working on the article. Reducing article size should not reduce content. Cmguy777 (talk) 20:20, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
- Did the Santo Domingo section clean up meet your approval? I need that type of feed back. I have the Grant biographies by Chernow, Smith, and White. I have the two Grant presidential biographies by Calhoun and Kahan. I believe my sources are reliable and trustworthy. Thank you. Cmguy777 (talk) 03:59, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
- I felt I have been the only one who has working on this article. Wikipedia is suppose to be a group editor editing. It's not one editor giving orders. I don’t agree GA should be removed. I felt I have been doing allot of the editing, trying to comply with "suggested" changes. Also, no one ever told me whether my changes were good enough. I hope there is no personal bias against Grant in any delisting process. I stopped editing because there was no positive feed back on my previous edits. That is not my fault. I believe the article is a good article too. It should not be delisted. This article well referenced. There needs to be more editors working on the article. Reducing article size should not reduce content. Cmguy777 (talk) 20:20, 9 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: Thanks for following up. Wikipedia is supposed to be the free encyclopedia that anyone can edit. Some articles are written by a single editor and some are written by a group. We are all volunteers and can choose where to edit: I have neither the interest nor the time to fully commit to improving this article. However, I am willing to give feedback to ongoing work. The best way to ensure that I reply is to ping me. However, I do not have the time to give constant feedback, and it is easier for me to evaluate whole sections or the whole article at once. More information on the GA criteria can be found at WP:GA?.
- Regarding the Santo Domingo section: I did a copyedit of the section and it seems fine. I would suggest a similar exercise happen throughout the entire article. Afterwards, editors can reevaluate the article's length and determine if more needs to be spun out to other articles. Z1720 (talk) 14:05, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720: Hello. I am all for copy editing, as long a content is retained in the article. Are there any sections you find too long or specifically need improving ? Thank you. Cmguy777 (talk) 20:15, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: As stated above, the whole article needs a copyedit to remove redundancies and summarise the prose more effectively. For example, "Foreign policy" has its own section that gives more detail on this subject: much of this section's inforamtion can be moved to that article, with this article focusing on the most important aspects. There are also lots of subsections that are quite short, like "Pratt & Boyd", "Hawaiian free trade treaty" or "Liberian-Grebo war" (this is not an exhaustive list). In general, per MOS:OVERSECTION if a section is a paragraph long, it should be merged with other sections. This merging might also help with summarising information as information can be moved to other articles or redundancies can be trimmed. Z1720 (talk) 20:48, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Cmguy777: As stated above, the whole article needs a copyedit to remove redundancies and summarise the prose more effectively. For example, "Foreign policy" has its own section that gives more detail on this subject: much of this section's inforamtion can be moved to that article, with this article focusing on the most important aspects. There are also lots of subsections that are quite short, like "Pratt & Boyd", "Hawaiian free trade treaty" or "Liberian-Grebo war" (this is not an exhaustive list). In general, per MOS:OVERSECTION if a section is a paragraph long, it should be merged with other sections. This merging might also help with summarising information as information can be moved to other articles or redundancies can be trimmed. Z1720 (talk) 20:48, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720: Hello. I am all for copy editing, as long a content is retained in the article. Are there any sections you find too long or specifically need improving ? Thank you. Cmguy777 (talk) 20:15, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
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There are lots of uncited statements, including entire paragraphs. At over 18,000 words, this article is too detailed and WP:TOOBIG. Many sections are numerous paragraphs long without a heading, making the text difficult to read on mobile devices. This article should be trimmed, with information spun out, summarised more effectively, or removed if too detailed. Z1720 (talk) 15:54, 8 July 2025 (UTC)
- Delist – unless it is cut down to 8,000 words max. The article is way too long, to a point where it is simply not readable. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 16:01, 8 July 2025 (UTC)
- It's now 4,000 words. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:21, 14 July 2025 (UTC)
- Delist – agree with Jens Lallensack that the article is much, much too long. I notice that citations to books do not specify page numbers. Looking at the history, the article was only 27.7kB when listed as a good article in October 2007. The article was expanded by 182kB in a single edit in January 2018. - Aa77zz (talk) 16:35, 8 July 2025 (UTC)
- Fixed, see below. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:22, 14 July 2025 (UTC)
- Agree there's a lot of unreadable stuff there. I've also just replaced a misidentified photo; the "nominate B. j. jamaicensis" photo was a random captive bird with zero information on its origin, I've added a genuine one from Puerto Rico instead. I'll check the other subspecies photos later. - MPF (talk) 17:25, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
- See below. The table that contains your image has gone; I have no objection to its restoration if you think it necessary. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:23, 14 July 2025 (UTC)
- Keep: Well as it was a GA and was made absurdly over-large by a single editor, I shall WP:BOLDly revert it to its pre-January 2018 state, and then we can all fill in any gaps from there. The version is reliably cited, mainly to scientific papers, and it covers all the obvious topics. There, done. Let's get this fixed together, everyone. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:18, 14 July 2025 (UTC)
- Keep - Sometimes, an article just deteriorates over time from a valid WP:WIAGA state. Chiswick Chap has restored an older, much better version. Reaper Eternal (talk) 14:11, 14 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Jens Lallensack, Aa77zz, and Z1720: are you satisfied with Chiswick Chap's edits? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:13, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- It is much better now, but I think that just reverting everything to the original GA state is not ideal either, as some crucial standard information (e.g., most taxonomy-related info) is now missing that the previous "long" version at least provided. We should try to get some of that back into the current version. Also, there are other issues, such as information in the lead that do not appear in the body. I will try to make some edits as soon as time allows. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 11:21, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 @Chiswick Chap @Jens Lallensack @Aa77zz - I'll put the subspecies table back in; I'll leave doing so for a bit to give anyone time to comment before I do. One thing I'm not sure of though is the vernacular names: in general, bird subspecies don't have separate English names, unless they are very distinctive. But equally, those English names do link to the separate subspecies pages, which are (presumably) orphaned now? - MPF (talk) 19:26, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- By all means put the table back in; meanwhile, I've linked all the subspecies names to their sub-articles. Chiswick Chap (talk) 20:42, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- I do think that our current list is better than the table: The list 1) is fully sourced, and 2) specifies how the subspecies differ. The table is not. So unless you want to re-do that table, I would prefer the list. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 20:52, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- Good call, thanks! I'll leave it as it is for now; might come back later to add the table framing and pics, together with the current text instead of the old text. - MPF (talk) 20:59, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 @Chiswick Chap @Jens Lallensack @Aa77zz - just checked on IOC; they only accept 13 subspecies, not 14, with B. j. solitudinis lumped into B. j. umbrinus. I'd suggest we follow suit, and merge the Cuban red-tailed hawk page into the Florida red-tailed hawk page, too - MPF (talk) 21:08, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- Sure, do it. Chiswick Chap (talk) 21:10, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- Agreed, we usually follow the IOC, we should here too. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 21:13, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Chiswick Chap @Jens Lallensack Will do, when I've got time (not tonight, possibly tomorrow...), unless you beat me to it 😆 - MPF (talk) 21:35, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 @Chiswick Chap @Jens Lallensack @Aa77zz - just checked on IOC; they only accept 13 subspecies, not 14, with B. j. solitudinis lumped into B. j. umbrinus. I'd suggest we follow suit, and merge the Cuban red-tailed hawk page into the Florida red-tailed hawk page, too - MPF (talk) 21:08, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- Good call, thanks! I'll leave it as it is for now; might come back later to add the table framing and pics, together with the current text instead of the old text. - MPF (talk) 20:59, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 @Chiswick Chap @Jens Lallensack @Aa77zz - I'll put the subspecies table back in; I'll leave doing so for a bit to give anyone time to comment before I do. One thing I'm not sure of though is the vernacular names: in general, bird subspecies don't have separate English names, unless they are very distinctive. But equally, those English names do link to the separate subspecies pages, which are (presumably) orphaned now? - MPF (talk) 19:26, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- It is much better now, but I think that just reverting everything to the original GA state is not ideal either, as some crucial standard information (e.g., most taxonomy-related info) is now missing that the previous "long" version at least provided. We should try to get some of that back into the current version. Also, there are other issues, such as information in the lead that do not appear in the body. I will try to make some edits as soon as time allows. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 11:21, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Jens Lallensack, Aa77zz, and Z1720: are you satisfied with Chiswick Chap's edits? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:13, 15 July 2025 (UTC)
- Now spent an hour on fixing the lead and taxonomy sections. I still don't love the article; I felt like I fix one issue just to find three more. Most importantly, important aspects are missing entirely. No word on migration/movements even though that's a big topic; nothing on how to distinguish it from similar species; nothing on life span and survivorship, parasites, population status and trends, conservation, etc. At the moment, I stick with "Delist" because the GA criterion "broad in its coverage" is not met. This should not be too difficult to fix; some of it could be taken from the "long" version that was reverted (in a much condensed form, of course). All aspects are summarised in the "Birds of the World" account, which for this species is freely accessible [12]. Still, it needs effort and time. @MPF: Do you think you could help to get at least some of these covered? If so, I might be able to take over a section provided that time allows. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 14:16, 16 July 2025 (UTC)
- MPF, are you still able to work on this GA save? I think the above comment from JL is the most major of the outstanding items. I'm not sure that all of the aspects are necessary for "broad in its coverage", but certainly some of them are. Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 12:38, 7 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Firefangledfeathers I'll see what I can do, but I doubt it'll be a lot, mainly just checking the subspecies are up-to-date per IOC - MPF (talk) 13:29, 7 August 2025 (UTC)
- MPF, are you still able to work on this GA save? I think the above comment from JL is the most major of the outstanding items. I'm not sure that all of the aspects are necessary for "broad in its coverage", but certainly some of them are. Firefangledfeathers (talk / contribs) 12:38, 7 August 2025 (UTC)
Each of the 14 subspecies has a separate Wiki article. This is very unusual - and in my opinion a bad idea. Subspecies are just regional variations, usually in size and plumage. Subspecies are very similar to the nominate form, often so similar that they cannot be distinguished in the field. The differences can be easily described in the article for the nominate. The behaviour sections (Food and feeding, Breeding etc) will normally be identical. Should the information be repeated? Another problem is that most subspecies don't have accepted English names. - Aa77zz (talk) 16:17, 16 July 2025 (UTC)
- I agree, but I worry that merging them all would overwhelm the main article, and even more so if other relevant details (taxonomic history, etymologies, conservation status and trends, number of breeding paris, photographs, etc.) are to be added for each of them, too. Already now we give a lot of room to the subspecies; making that section even longer might verge on WP:undue. If the subspecies list gets too long, we could maybe create a spin-off article Taxonomy of the red-tailed hawk, where we could have a proper section for each subspecies. This would also allow us to cover potential subspecies and those that are currently not accepted, as well as other taxonomic detail that does not fit the main article. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 16:44, 16 July 2025 (UTC)
- The subspecies articles are not part of this GAR. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:26, 2 August 2025 (UTC)
- This is minor compared to the other issues, but could someone more familiar with birds take a look at the external links section? At 10 links, it appears to have too many entries if I'm reading WP:EL correctly. I'm questioning why a Flickr group is included and why several of the other links cannot either be incorporated as citations or added as "further reading" instead. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 02:20, 21 July 2025 (UTC)
- I removed a good number of the bullet points in External Links just now. The All About Birds species account is already a reference in the text, the North American Falconers Association is not expressly relevant to red-tailed hawks, and the other four links I removed were guides on how to identify different morphs. Commons and Wikispecies can be accessed through the sidebar more easily than at the bottom of the page. -- Reconrabbit 18:01, 23 July 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks, the external links section looks a lot better now. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 01:57, 27 July 2025 (UTC)
- I removed a good number of the bullet points in External Links just now. The All About Birds species account is already a reference in the text, the North American Falconers Association is not expressly relevant to red-tailed hawks, and the other four links I removed were guides on how to identify different morphs. Commons and Wikispecies can be accessed through the sidebar more easily than at the bottom of the page. -- Reconrabbit 18:01, 23 July 2025 (UTC)
- It has been several weeks since there were significant edits to the article. It has also gone from being one of the longest GAs to being just over 3,000 words, which is pretty significant. There were many declarations made concerning a different version of the article, so can interested editors take a look at the current version and give comments on if the article is ready to be declared "keep", or if not what the next steps might be? Z1720 (talk) 15:36, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
- I have to stick with "delist", per my comment above [13] --Jens Lallensack (talk) 15:42, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
- GA does not ask for a perfect article, nor total coverage (both impossible anyway), but for a decent introduction to a large subject, which this is. I've added a bit on migration, restoring the old text to a subsidiary article; and mentions of parasites and its status (commonest hawk in N. America). Longevity is briefly mentioned. Wikipedia is not an identification how-to guide: not totally averse to a brief note on species it can be confused with, but further comparison is basically out of scope. I'm staying with "keep". Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:52, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
- Jens Lallensack - I seem to have taken over most of this by default. I've addressed all the issues you mentioned. Hope it's now ok. If not, say what else is needed, but we must be very close to the most that can be asked of a GA by now. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:21, 30 August 2025 (UTC)
- GA does not ask for a perfect article, nor total coverage (both impossible anyway), but for a decent introduction to a large subject, which this is. I've added a bit on migration, restoring the old text to a subsidiary article; and mentions of parasites and its status (commonest hawk in N. America). Longevity is briefly mentioned. Wikipedia is not an identification how-to guide: not totally averse to a brief note on species it can be confused with, but further comparison is basically out of scope. I'm staying with "keep". Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:52, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
- Chiswick Chap – Thank you, but unfortunately the issues are deep and the mentioned examples are just scratching the surface. As I said above, I spent an hour myself on this article and the issues were so numerous that I lost faith that it could be brought up to standard without a complete rewrite.
- I disagree that distinguishing features are out of scope. This is arguably the most important thing that the average reader wants to have detailed information on (how do I identify this species?). The article cites at least three identification guides – on what basis can we argue that identification is out of scope when it is a major focus of a substantial part of the sources? The lead says that it "can be distinguished from other North American hawks by the eponymous tail", but not even this is mentioned in the body at all. Instead, most of the "Description" section is on size (which is WP:undue in my view). So why are details such as "the exposed culmen was reported to range from 21.7 to 30.2 mm" due weight while details on distinguishing features are not?
- I now also looked on sourcing and that just confirmed my earlier impression that a re-write is needed and that point fixes are just not enough. A major source in this article is "Animal Diversity Web". The provided link is dead, but the site is here. From my experience, "Animal Diversity Web" is unreliable; after all, it is an encyclopedia written by students that sometimes cites it sources and sometimes not. But even if we accept this as a reliable source, there are major source-text integrity issues. For example, the last paragraph of "Reproduction" (which has 13 sentences) cites the Animal Diversity Web as the only source, but most of it is not supported by that source, and some of it is contradicting it. Just take the first sentence: A clutch of one to three eggs is laid in March or April, depending upon latitude. – The source says The female lays 1 to 5 eggs around the first week of April, and it doesn't mention the influence of latitude.
- I am really not enjoying being the "bad guy" here, and I agree that the new "Migration" section is a very significant improvement (again, thanks for that), but this article is simply not a "Good Article" by our criteria for multiple reasons. The major sourcing issue pointed out above would have been reason enough to quick-fail on sources if this were new at GAN. "Animal Diversity Web" is the only source I checked so far because it is the most easy to access, and my confidence that such issues are absent in the remaining article is not high. I think that we only replaced a bad version of the article with another bad version. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 09:52, 31 August 2025 (UTC)
- I'm sorry you feel like that. Wikipedia however is Not a How-To Guide, and "how to identify" is definitely in how-to territory. And, you obviously can't argue from what is in an article what is a proper subject for the article: Wikipedia is not a reliable source. I'll leave it at that (and fix the dead link); let's see what other folks think. Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:16, 31 August 2025 (UTC)
- I just added some bits on identification. The main remaining issue is the text-source integrity, and that an entire long paragraph is mostly not supported by the provided source is not a good sign. Bad sourcing is the most time-intensive issue to fix that an article can have, and I don't even have access to many of those cited books. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 20:18, 31 August 2025 (UTC)
- I've checked and rewritten the paragraph: most of it was supported, but I've trimmed it to the main facts. ADW is, whatever its authors, based thoroughly on scientific sources and it is not a deprecated source. On the other sources used, your lack of access to them is not germane to GAR. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:37, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Aa77zz, MPF, Reaper Eternal, Trainsandotherthings, and Reconrabbit: if any of you might venture an opinion on the above dispute, it would be a great help to the best improvement of the article. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 09:12, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- My contribution to this GAR was not that substantial, but I will offer that much of the information that is cited to Animal Diversity Web (ADW) could be readily supplanted by Birds of the World Online, which uses some of the same sources (such as "The Birds of North America"). I see now that this site is used only once, and the more readily accessible but also less informative All About Birds is cited in two places. That's about as much as I can helpfully provide. My opinion on ADW is that it is a fine place to start but should be backed up by or replaced with better sources, such as those it cites, when possible. -- Reconrabbit 13:34, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- Do you have a Birds of the World Online subscription, or is it available via the Wiki library? Chiswick Chap (talk) 13:46, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- I don't have much time for Wikipedia right now, but I will drop by this discussion again by Friday. Trainsandotherthings (talk) 21:42, 16 September 2025 (UTC)
- My contribution to this GAR was not that substantial, but I will offer that much of the information that is cited to Animal Diversity Web (ADW) could be readily supplanted by Birds of the World Online, which uses some of the same sources (such as "The Birds of North America"). I see now that this site is used only once, and the more readily accessible but also less informative All About Birds is cited in two places. That's about as much as I can helpfully provide. My opinion on ADW is that it is a fine place to start but should be backed up by or replaced with better sources, such as those it cites, when possible. -- Reconrabbit 13:34, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Aa77zz, MPF, Reaper Eternal, Trainsandotherthings, and Reconrabbit: if any of you might venture an opinion on the above dispute, it would be a great help to the best improvement of the article. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 09:12, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- I've checked and rewritten the paragraph: most of it was supported, but I've trimmed it to the main facts. ADW is, whatever its authors, based thoroughly on scientific sources and it is not a deprecated source. On the other sources used, your lack of access to them is not germane to GAR. Chiswick Chap (talk) 11:37, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
- I just added some bits on identification. The main remaining issue is the text-source integrity, and that an entire long paragraph is mostly not supported by the provided source is not a good sign. Bad sourcing is the most time-intensive issue to fix that an article can have, and I don't even have access to many of those cited books. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 20:18, 31 August 2025 (UTC)
- I'm sorry you feel like that. Wikipedia however is Not a How-To Guide, and "how to identify" is definitely in how-to territory. And, you obviously can't argue from what is in an article what is a proper subject for the article: Wikipedia is not a reliable source. I'll leave it at that (and fix the dead link); let's see what other folks think. Chiswick Chap (talk) 10:16, 31 August 2025 (UTC)
- I have to stick with "delist", per my comment above [13] --Jens Lallensack (talk) 15:42, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
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Some uncited text (including entire paragraphs) and lots of one-paragraph sections which should be merged per MOS:OVERSECTION. History stops at 2022 so there might be some recent information to add to the article. Z1720 (talk) 18:39, 6 July 2025 (UTC)
- It certainly needs updating for the past four years, but it's not an impossible task. Best of luck. Bearian (talk) 19:59, 6 July 2025 (UTC)
- I have done some prior work on US drug policy articles like United States v. Doremus, so I will take this GAR on and get started within the next few days. ViridianPenguin🐧 (💬) 19:52, 29 July 2025 (UTC)
- Finished with a comprehensive copyediting of the article, added/removed various references to improve sourcing quality, and combined sections as needed per Z1720's opening comments. Per Z1720, there is still some recent history to be added, but I begin law school tomorrow, so my progress on this will be a bit slower. I expect to finish within a month (ping me if I don't), but anyone else is free to finish the reassessment work in the meantime. ViridianPenguin🐧 (💬) 16:38, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- @ViridianPenguin: There is no rush from me to close this. Happy for this to be kept open. Z1720 (talk) 16:53, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- @ViridianPenguin: It has been several weeks since you have made an edit to this article. Still interested in working on this? Z1720 (talk) 01:25, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks for the requested ping! Yes, I will get back to finishing this GAR, hopefully starting today. ViridianPenguin🐧 (💬) 13:09, 2 September 2025 (UTC)
- @ViridianPenguin: It has been almost two weeks, and the last edit to the article was in August. Would it be better to delist this article, so that you can work on this without the pressure of a GAR, and then when it is ready you can nominate it for GAN again? Z1720 (talk) 13:54, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- Sorry! Since my last reply, I have been reading Owusu-Bempah and Rehmatullah's 2023 Waiting to Inhale book, which has some of the recent history that I need to finish this up. I would like the GAR to stay open a bit longer to now implement this info. ViridianPenguin🐧 (💬) 05:18, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 OK, that book ended up being a dud, so I finished off updating claims on state legalization of recreational cannabis using news sites. I am pretty happy that my edits over the past 1.5mo were able to reduce the prose size by 30% to summarize existing claims while adding new details and correcting outright falsehoods. Let me know what you think as to whether the article can be kept at GA or needs further work. Thanks! ViridianPenguin🐧 (💬) 23:04, 18 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 OK, that book ended up being a dud, so I finished off updating claims on state legalization of recreational cannabis using news sites. I am pretty happy that my edits over the past 1.5mo were able to reduce the prose size by 30% to summarize existing claims while adding new details and correcting outright falsehoods. Let me know what you think as to whether the article can be kept at GA or needs further work. Thanks! ViridianPenguin🐧 (💬) 23:04, 18 September 2025 (UTC)
- Sorry! Since my last reply, I have been reading Owusu-Bempah and Rehmatullah's 2023 Waiting to Inhale book, which has some of the recent history that I need to finish this up. I would like the GAR to stay open a bit longer to now implement this info. ViridianPenguin🐧 (💬) 05:18, 15 September 2025 (UTC)
- @ViridianPenguin: It has been almost two weeks, and the last edit to the article was in August. Would it be better to delist this article, so that you can work on this without the pressure of a GAR, and then when it is ready you can nominate it for GAN again? Z1720 (talk) 13:54, 14 September 2025 (UTC)
- @ViridianPenguin: It has been several weeks since you have made an edit to this article. Still interested in working on this? Z1720 (talk) 01:25, 1 September 2025 (UTC)
- Finished with a comprehensive copyediting of the article, added/removed various references to improve sourcing quality, and combined sections as needed per Z1720's opening comments. Per Z1720, there is still some recent history to be added, but I begin law school tomorrow, so my progress on this will be a bit slower. I expect to finish within a month (ping me if I don't), but anyone else is free to finish the reassessment work in the meantime. ViridianPenguin🐧 (💬) 16:38, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
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Uncited statements, including the entire "Short term effects" section. The lead might also need to be trimmed a bit. Z1720 (talk) 01:58, 25 June 2025 (UTC)
- Please allow me some time to work on this article and the Asprin one as you’ve opened 3 medical GAR recently and these tend to be quite hard to track down citations for. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 07:42, 25 June 2025 (UTC)
- @IntentionallyDense: GARs tend to stay open as long as editors are working on them. Please provide periodic updates so that editors know that you are still making progress. Z1720 (talk) 13:33, 25 June 2025 (UTC)
- IntentionallyDense, do you still intend to work on this article? No worries if not. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:20, 24 July 2025 (UTC)
- i do really hope to, there’s about 5 (guessing, i’m not sure) medical GARs open right now and i’m currently dealing with my own medical issues so i’ve come to the conclusion that i won’t have time to improve all of them but i do want to at least work on this one. I will try to remember to pop by and update people in about a week but if i don’t please feel free to tag me as this will be my first priority as soon as i am well enough. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 04:02, 25 July 2025 (UTC)
- Update: I'm slowly trying to pick away at the unsourced bits of the article and I did attempt to trim the lead but I don't think there is much more I can do there for now. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 05:12, 28 July 2025 (UTC)
- i've done some more trimming. Thank you! Tom B (talk) 23:30, 14 August 2025 (UTC)
- IntentionallyDense, do you still intend to work on this article? No worries if not. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:20, 24 July 2025 (UTC)
- @IntentionallyDense: GARs tend to stay open as long as editors are working on them. Please provide periodic updates so that editors know that you are still making progress. Z1720 (talk) 13:33, 25 June 2025 (UTC)
- Please allow me some time to work on this article and the Asprin one as you’ve opened 3 medical GAR recently and these tend to be quite hard to track down citations for. IntentionallyDense (Contribs) 07:42, 25 June 2025 (UTC)
- People have added sources, e.g. for that section, so it looks like it's been brought up to standard, Tom B (talk) 23:31, 14 August 2025 (UTC)
- I added two citation needed tags to the article. Since this is a MED article, I am a little more strict about getting all citation concerns resolved before making any declarations. No page size or sourcing concerns. Z1720 (talk) 15:32, 26 August 2025 (UTC)
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The election support section stops at 2016, and does not comment on 2020 or the upcoming election. There are many uncited sentences and paragraphs. There are many short, one sentence paragraphs, especially in the Activism section. Z1720 (talk) 14:36, 3 June 2025 (UTC)
- Agree that some sections could use a re-write to better organize instead of a dated list of factoids. There are no "citation needed" maintenance tags so if there are claims that need citations it would be good to identify these. It will be a couple of weeks until I can spend some time with this article. Nnev66 (talk) 14:07, 24 June 2025 (UTC)
- @Nnev66: I have added citation needed tags per the above request. Z1720 (talk) 19:46, 4 July 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks for adding these. I will look for citations and have already added a few. I notice there are sometimes details that may not need to be included in the article (too granular) that don't have sourcing. I'm tempted to remove these, e.g. "Women's Institute for Freedom of the Press" and "Frontline Women's Fund" - do you have thoughts about this? On the latter there is a non-independent web site for half of the claim, but I don't think every organization Steinem has been involve with needs to be listed, especially if it doesn't have WP:RS coverage. Nnev66 (talk) 17:04, 9 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Nnev66: If it is WP:TMI or too much WP:DETAIL, it can be removed. I also don't think every organisation she has been involved with should be listed: only the most notable for Steinem's biography. Z1720 (talk) 15:07, 10 July 2025 (UTC)
- Z1720, Nnev has resolved the cn tags; are there any other remaining issues that cannot be resolved via your copyedit? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 15:25, 24 July 2025 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: There's some unreliable sources in the article (tv.com, Zimbio) that should be removed. I would also like to see "Personal life" and "In media" sections fixed up more before doing a copyedit and several sections need more level 3 heading to split up the text. "Selected awards and honors" is too detailed and non-notable awards should probably be removed. Overall, the amount of work needed to fix up the formatting seems more than a simple copyedit that I won't be able to complete, and I wouldn't give a "keep" declaration at this time. @Nnev66: are you interested in addressing some of the above? No worries if not. Z1720 (talk) 17:46, 24 July 2025 (UTC)
- I can work on these. Removed the tv.com, Zimbio refs. Nnev66 (talk) 03:15, 25 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Z1720 and Nnev66: where does this reassessment stand? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:16, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
- I can work on these. Removed the tv.com, Zimbio refs. Nnev66 (talk) 03:15, 25 July 2025 (UTC)
- @AirshipJungleman29: There's some unreliable sources in the article (tv.com, Zimbio) that should be removed. I would also like to see "Personal life" and "In media" sections fixed up more before doing a copyedit and several sections need more level 3 heading to split up the text. "Selected awards and honors" is too detailed and non-notable awards should probably be removed. Overall, the amount of work needed to fix up the formatting seems more than a simple copyedit that I won't be able to complete, and I wouldn't give a "keep" declaration at this time. @Nnev66: are you interested in addressing some of the above? No worries if not. Z1720 (talk) 17:46, 24 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Nnev66: If it is WP:TMI or too much WP:DETAIL, it can be removed. I also don't think every organisation she has been involved with should be listed: only the most notable for Steinem's biography. Z1720 (talk) 15:07, 10 July 2025 (UTC)
- @Nnev66: I have added citation needed tags per the above request. Z1720 (talk) 19:46, 4 July 2025 (UTC)
My citation concerns have been resolved. Formatting concerns remain with too many short, one-sentence paragraphs, especially in the "In media" section. Z1720 (talk) 15:23, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
- Fixing the referencing issues was straightforward enough, but I've been a bit paralyzed about combining or removing various one-sentence factoids - it's on my list to clean-up, as well as look for anything more recently that could be worth adding. Nnev66 (talk) 20:42, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Nnev66: For the short paragraphs: If you want, you can combine two or three short paragraphs together, then ping me here. I can take a look and give ideas on what else might need to be done (if needed). I'm always happy to help review, but unfortunately don't have the time to copyedit several GAs. Z1720 (talk) 21:32, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Nnev66 Any plans to work on this further? Tarlby (t) (c) 00:27, 2 September 2025 (UTC)
- Yes, I'd plan to work on this. I'll do so today. Nnev66 (talk) 13:07, 2 September 2025 (UTC)
- OK I organized the "In media" section so please take a look. Any other concerns? Nnev66 (talk) 13:51, 2 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Nnev66 Any plans to work on this further? Tarlby (t) (c) 00:27, 2 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Nnev66: No concerns with the "In the media" section. I added a citation needed template to the article, and the short one-sentence paragraphs in "Personal life" and "Activism" still need to be resolved. Z1720 (talk) 23:17, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Nnev66: No concerns with the "In the media" section. I added a citation needed template to the article, and the short one-sentence paragraphs in "Personal life" and "Activism" still need to be resolved. Z1720 (talk) 23:17, 10 September 2025 (UTC)
- @Nnev66: For the short paragraphs: If you want, you can combine two or three short paragraphs together, then ping me here. I can take a look and give ideas on what else might need to be done (if needed). I'm always happy to help review, but unfortunately don't have the time to copyedit several GAs. Z1720 (talk) 21:32, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
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